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  • Podcast Episode Summary: Pilots - Part Three

    Introduction In the final installment of the Pilots  series, Katherine wraps up her conversation with Marco and Nate—two seasoned regional pilots whose combined 17 years of flight time have given them more than a few stories to tell. This episode is a mix of myth-busting, industry truths, and the kind of pilot-lingo-fueled banter that gives you a peek behind the cockpit curtain. From “souls on board” and why that phrase lingers, to the moments when aviation and pop culture go hilariously off-course, this one’s a must for anyone who’s ever looked up and wondered what life is like at 35,000 feet. If you’re a writer digging into aviation, a listener who loves behind-the-scenes chats, or just someone who enjoys a good origin story, you’ll find a soft place to land here. Let’s hang. Here's the link to this specific podcast episode on my website.  Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! Timestamps 00:00:49 What movies, media, pop culture gets it wrong? 00:06:50  So with call-ins, call-outs, when you're talking about anything over the radio? What certain points need to be hit in order to be understood? What are you identifying? 00:13:38 What is something that you think most people in your field would like to have changed? 00:16:18 The divorce rate for the pilot 00:19:59 Is it something that you notice, more wild with the younger crowd, more wild with the older crowd? 00:21:09 Is there a physical item related to piloting or aviation that you guys cherish? 00:24:48 How does one adapt the pilot speak? 00:25:57 If I weren't in this field, I would never believe what? 00:29:11 You've mentioned the newer prospects and stuff. Is there any advice that you have for them outside of just keep pushing through? 00:35:15 And when they refer to your passengers, they say, how many souls on board? 00:36:53 You mentioned souls being old terminology. Is there other old terminology that's bled through? 00:37:15 Alpha, bravo, trolley, delta, echo. You guys have that memorized now? 00:37:52 So if you weren't a pilot…   00:43:27 So best job ever. 00:44:12 What got me into aviation? 00:49:01 What are pink tags? Key Takeaways: Pop culture rarely gets pilots right Movies dramatize the cockpit, but pilots say the real thing is more about precision than adrenaline. The gap between entertainment and aviation reality shapes public misconceptions about the job. The words matter—radio talk isn’t just jargon From clearances to cockpit chatter, aviation language is built for clarity, not flair. Pilots break down how communication keeps people safe and how it reflects culture, hierarchy, and confidence in flight. Behind the uniform: burnout, stress, and sacrifice Irregular hours, emotional distance, and intense responsibility can wear pilots down. These stories reveal the human cost of aviation careers and why mental health needs to be taken more seriously in the industry. Advice to new pilots? Think endurance, not ego It’s not all cinematic flair. New aviators need patience, humility, and a long-game mindset. Success in aviation often looks more like consistency than charisma. Why they keep flying: joy, gear, and small moments Despite everything, pilots return to the skies for the same reasons they started: the sound of a favorite aircraft, a smooth landing, or the simple awe of seeing the world from above. Purpose often lives in the details. Editor's Note: We’ve all seen the movie pilots: cool, confident, with sunglasses and a flair for one-liners. But real-life pilots? They’re a fascinating blend of discipline, humor, and unexpected vulnerability—and in this episode, you’ll hear exactly that. As a writer, this final chapter in the series was gold. The way Marco and Nate peel back the layers of industry norms, emotional toll, and linguistic quirks gave me more than material—it gave me perspective. If you’ve ever tried to write an aviation scene or build a character in uniform, you’ll want to eavesdrop on this. And if you’re just here for the vibes? Buckle up. You’re in good hands. Links & Resources: Phonetic Alphabet via Wikipedia Radio Communications Phraseology and Techniques Guide  supplied by the FAA Reddit AMA's (Ask Me Anything) with Pilots Aviation Slang from Sierra Hotel Aeronautics' website Part One of this Series Part Two of this Series May your metaphors stay smooth and your stories stay airborne, Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Pilots - Part Two

    Introduction In Part Two  of this 3-part series, Katherine stays grounded (figuratively) while flying deep (literally) with Marco and Nate, two seasoned regional pilots with 17 years of experience between them. This time, the conversation gets personal—and sometimes hilariously honest—as they dive into the emotions, stereotypes, and unexpected curveballs that come with a life spent in the sky. From the thrill of flying next to eagles to dealing with burnout, to answering the age-old question: have you ever been struck by lightning?  (Spoiler: you’ll want to buckle up for that one.) Writers and storytellers, this episode is also a quiet masterclass in character work. Whether you’re building an airline pilot protagonist or just want to capture the feeling of someone balancing logic, emotion, and a checklist, these two are gold. Part 2 lets you sit in the jump seat and hear what it really  feels like to live a life above the clouds. Let’s hang. Here's the link to this specific podcast episode on my website.  Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! Timestamps 00:00:57 What are typical emotions that you yourself go through? The anger, frustration, bliss. What's a sort of something that you experience on the daily, or that you would hope to experience on the daily, but instead you get X, Y, Z? 00:03:03 Now, why is it that you won't [the photo]? 00:06:03 "Actually, you ever been struck by lightning?" 00:08:42 So I'm hearing about eagles flying beside you, and these beautiful weather-related experiences. Is there anything else that really gets you excited about piloting and aviation that just makes your job fucking worth it? 00:12:58 What is the typical dress of those in either piloting or aviation? Does it vary based on what plane you're flying or what airline? 00:16:20 Do you get roasted a lot in this field? 00:18:35 What is the most draining part of the job? Something that is like your least favorite thing to do. 00:20:37 You touched on some stereotypes, but are there any stereotypes or cliches that you would like to take this platform to debunk? 00:23:57 So you mentioned that there were some things that might pop up where the plane is still operational. 00:30:09 So Murphy's Law states that anything that can go wrong will go wrong. What is something that perhaps is often overlooked or forgotten, that you need to just make sure that you flip this or check this? 00:34:19 Is there such thing as being too long in the industry, where there are pilots where it's just like, oh boy, you need to retire. 00:35:54 What is something that will take you off the roster? 00:39:51 So what kind of other sounds do you encounter? 00:42:57 I'm curious, like Florence Nightingale was a hero for nurses, like Arnold Schwarzenegger is a role model for bodybuilders. Is there a hero for pilots? 00:48:58 Earlier in the podcast, you mentioned plateaus. Do you guys have any personal experiences with hitting that plateau? 00:56:16 Contract negotiations are just on fire for pilots right now. 00:58:22 So when you see this problem on the news about the pilot shortage… 01:04:02 Why is it that [Spirit] got such a bad rap then? Key Takeaways: Pilot emotions = human emotions Flying might look sleek from the outside, but the reality includes frustration, fatigue, boredom, and the occasional burst of joy. The guys share stories that remind us that while pilots are professionals, they’re also people with real emotional landscapes. Stereotypes don’t hold altitude Forget the "Top Gun" mystique. Real pilots push back on media portrayals and share what it’s actually like in the cockpit. These stories unpack assumptions and reveal a broader, more grounded range of personalities in aviation. Murphy’s Law is always on standby Pre-flight rituals are habitual because they're so essential. One skipped checklist item can trigger a cascade of small issues. The margin for error is thin, which makes preparation sacred, not optional. Unsung heroes keep things flying Some of the most influential pilots aren’t household names. The stories shared highlight mentors and colleagues whose leadership, skill, and grace shape the profession far from the spotlight. Burnout happens at 30,000 feet too Even for those who love flying, the routine can wear thin. These conversations explore what it means to plateau mid-career—and how curiosity, mentorship, and challenge can reignite that original spark. Editor Note: There’s a subtle tension in this episode that any writer will appreciate: people working in high-stakes environments who still have to carry around the weight of daily emotions, minor annoyances, and self-doubt. Marco and Nate offer both insight and vulnerability—reminding us that even in a field built on precision, there’s still room for feeling. For storytellers, it’s a reminder that good characters don’t always need chaos to be compelling. Sometimes, the sky itself is the setting, the conflict, and the metaphor. Plus, there’s an offhand lightning strike story in here that’s cinematic gold. Just saying. Links & Resources: Articles about Flight Attire and Uniform Codes on Simple Flying Fatigue in Aviation Brochure from the Federal Aviation Administration Smithsonian's National Air and Space Museum 's list of People You Should Know From the site: "Their stories are united by one common feature—they made that history as members of historically excluded groups and communities. Members of these groups and communities didn't just face the common barriers encountered in aviation and space—barriers of engineering, physics, and more. They also faced barriers of prejudice, such as being denied training and resources. Overcoming these obstacles, they achieved their goals and made history.  This page is intended to be an introduction to a selection of history makers from some historically excluded groups. Our hope is that this page will excite you and encourage you to dig deeper into these stories and others."  Thunderstorm Formation and Aviation Hazards from The Front , NOAA’s National Weather Service's occasional (and not since 2020) newsletter Lightning and Planes article on National Weather Service 's website Part One of this Series Part Three of this Series Filed this under flight logs, Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Pilots - Part One

    Introduction In Part One of this three-part series, Katherine chats with Marco and Nate—two regional pilots with nearly two decades of collective flight time. From what’s in their fridge (yep, we're going there) to what it’s like inside a flight simulator, this episode covers the nitty-gritty of daily pilot life with warmth, curiosity, and a dash of dry skin talk. If you’re someone who loves digging into real-world routines, quirky human details, and niche subcultures (especially ones with uniforms and acronyms), you’ll love this one. Katherine brings her signature writerly eye to the flight deck, asking questions that hover between “How does this actually work?” and “What’s the emotional cost of flying 30,000 feet above it all?” Welcome to the world of pilots—from personality assessments to hangar banter, and everything in between. Here's the link to this specific podcast episode on my website.  Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! TIMESTAMPS 00:00:49 What is in your fridge? 00:04:39 What is in your flight bags? 00:06:24 Do you guys get dry skin? 00:07:43 Is there anything else that you could spot on a pilot on their body where you're like, you're a pilot? 00:08:30 What accolades or credentials do you guys go by? 00:10:37 How did you get into cargo? 00:13:09 You'll go through ground school, and then you'll go through whatever flight portion you need to obtain the certificate, right? 00:13:45 What is it like being in a flight simulator? 00:16:01 What's a typical day for you? 00:18:03 How does it affect your sleep? 00:20:28 How do you go about saying that you're fatigued? 00:25:32 What cargo were you moving? 00:27:47 What makes a great instructor? 00:31:02 What's a personality assessment? 00:34:56 Working as a crew 00:36:44 Fixation. 00:39:23 What is the social culture of being a pilot, an instructor in an aviation scene, whether it's a hangar, whether it's an airport, whether it's just shooting the shit with other pilots, what is the culture that you guys get to share where nobody else understands the stuff that we go through? 00:42:50 Do you struggle in any way with friendships outside? 00:44:45 Your flight hours determine where you live in the country. 00:49:46 Could you guys moonlight as weathermen based on your knowledge? 00:50:25 aviationweather.gov . 00:51:15 What other resources do you guys use to either keep up on your knowledge or to inform you of new stuff that's in the field? 00:53:28 So as far as flying and getting all the credentials needed, is flying a plane in the US about the same or different as flying a plane in the UK versus flying a plane in the Uruguay versus flying a plane and does it vary state by state? 00:57:25 How fast is too fast? How slow is too slow? 01:00:40 So you said difference, that you go by FAA until there's a difference. 01:03:40 What makes [airports] so efficient? Key Takeaways: The body remembers what the job demands Dry skin, calloused hands, and disrupted sleep—all physical evidence of the labor and limits that come with flying. Pilots learn to read each other by these markers, like a shared language carved into the body. Saying “I’m fatigued” is its own form of courage Fatigue is a constant threat to safety in aviation. Pilots are trained to recognize it and speak up, but the culture doesn’t always make that easy. Owning your limits in a profession that valorizes grit takes knowledge and trust in your crew. Flight bags are biographies in disguise Every flight bag is a curated mix of policy, survival, and personality—logbooks and lip balm, checklists and lucky charms. What pilots carry says as much about who they are as what they do. It’s logistics AND identity. The classroom never closes Even after ground school and flight simulators, the training never stops. Pilots are always preparing for what-if scenarios they hope never happen. This readiness shapes how they think, react, and relate to risk itself. Pilots are quiet meteorologists Pilots study patterns, pressure systems, and cloud behavior with a precision most people overlook. Their fluency in turbulence, visibility, and forecasting is second nature, built from thousands of hours in the air and on the ground. Editor's Note: As a writer, I’m always chasing the "invisible work" behind a role—what people actually  carry, feel, say when no one's asking. This episode? It delivers. Pilots Marco and Nate opened up about the culture, rituals, and quiet intensity of flight life, and it reminded me how much language  and rhythm  shape every job, not just writing. If you’re building a character who flies, a world that moves at 500 knots, or even just looking for ways to ask better questions—this one’s for you. References & Links: aviationweather.gov  – The site mentioned by Nate and Marco for real-time weather reports and forecasts pilots rely on. FAA Airplane Flying Handbook (PDF)  – The actual training manual used by many student pilots. Inside a Flight Simulator – YouTube  – Look for a solid explainer or POV video from real training environments. Part Two of this Series Part Three of this Series From 30,000 feet to the written page, Katherine Arkady

  • Obscure Literary Terms: Foil

    If you've gotten your hair colored before, your colorist has probably put some foils in your hair. If you're a fan of Gothic architecture, you know a foil is a leaf-shaped, indented space which, combined with cusps (small, projecting arcs outlining the leaf design), are found especially in the tracery (decorative openwork) of Gothic windows. If you've left a party and they send you home with a plate, it's probably covered in foil . If you're a fan of period films and obscure sports, you know that a foil is the thin, light sword used in the sport of fencing. If you are out for revenge, you'll ultimately want to foil the plans of your enemy. If you know your jewelry, foil backing (or foiling) is a gemstone surface enhancement technique where a thin sheet of metal or other material (sometimes colored) is placed behind the gemstone in order to reflect more light, and/or color, back into the stone and then towards the viewer. Yes, foil is a very versatile and adaptive homonym. And a foil can help writers become versatile and adaptable, too! No need for a tinfoil hat to understand it either! The word " foil " originates from the Old French word "fuoille," which evolved from the Latin word "folium," meaning "leaf." The use of the word " foil " in the sense of a thin sheet of metal developed from its original meaning of "leaf." Just as leaves are thin and flexible, so too are foils . And the foils discussed in this blog post are similar in theory! A foil is essentially a character whose traits contrast sharply with those of another character — typically the main character. By emphasizing these differences, the foil helps to highlight certain qualities of the main character. Just like a leaf provides a backdrop for a flower. For example, if the protagonist is impulsive and reckless, a foil might be calm and methodical, emphasizing the protagonist's tendency to act without thinking. Who and what are some prominent foils? 1. Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde in Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde by Robert Louis Stevenson  Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde are two sides of the same person, with Dr. Jekyll embodying restraint and morality, while Mr. Hyde represents unrestrained evil. Their juxtaposition explores the duality of human nature. 2. Sherlock Holmes and Dr. John Watson in The Sherlock Holmes Series by Arthur Conan Doyle Holmes is cold, analytical, and detached, while Watson is compassionate, emotional, and grounded. Watson's more human side highlights Holmes' near superhuman logic, making their partnership essential for readers to appreciate Holmes's genius. 3. Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy in the Harry Potter Series by J.K. Rowling While Harry is courageous, selfless, and humble, Draco is arrogant, privileged, and often cowardly. This contrast not only highlights Harry's virtues but also challenges him, as he often has to confront the darker aspects of himself. 4. Harry Potter and Neville Longbottom in the Harry Potter Series by J.K. Rowling While Harry and Neville may initially appear to be very different, with Harry as the courageous hero and Neville as the clumsy underdog, they are actually foils who share a similar backstory and potential for greatness. Neville’s growth throughout the series, culminating in his heroism in the final book, serves to emphasize Harry’s own journey, showing that heroes come in many forms. 5. Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby in The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald Tom is a brutish, old-money aristocrat who embodies the arrogance and entitlement of the upper class, while Gatsby, with his mysterious past and new money, represents ambition, optimism, and the pursuit of the American Dream. Their differences highlight the social tensions of 1920s America and the elusive nature of success. 6. Heathcliff and Edgar Linton in Wuthering Heights by Emily Brontë Heathcliff is dark, brooding, and vengeful, while Edgar is gentle, refined, and compassionate. This contrast highlights the tumultuous emotions in the novel and Catherine Earnshaw’s internal conflict between love and societal expectations. 7. Elizabeth Bennet and Charlotte Lucas in Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen While Elizabeth is witty, idealistic, and determined to marry for love, Charlotte is practical and marries Mr. Collins for security. This contrast highlights Elizabeth’s progressive views on love and personal happiness, as well as the societal pressures faced by women in the Regency era. 8. Dorothy Gale and The Wicked Witch of the West in The Wonderful Wizard of Oz by L. Frank Baum Dorothy is kind, innocent, and empathetic, while the Witch is cruel, vengeful, and power-hungry. Their opposition emphasizes the power of kindness, courage, and friendship over fear and tyranny. "Okay but how can I put this towards my writing?" you ask me. The key to a great foil isn't just opposition for opposition's sake but the way this contrast enriches the story. Think of it as a mirror image that reflects a skewed version of the protagonist’s qualities. Your readers can see the traits in a new light. 1. Highlight Key Traits  Think about the main traits you want to emphasize in your protagonist. What qualities define them? By creating a foil with opposing traits, you can amplify the qualities that matter most. Let’s say your protagonist is patient and compassionate —you might create a foil who is impulsive and indifferent . This contrast serves as a "test" for your protagonist's patience and pushes them into situations where their usual approach wouldn't work, therefore, revealing their strengths and weaknesses. If your protagonist is idealistic and believes in doing the right thing, consider a foil who is realistic and pragmatic, willing to cut corners to get results. This dynamic can create moral tension and force your protagonist to confront their beliefs. Here are more examples: Optimistic vs. Pessimistic Samwise Gamgee vs. Boromir ( The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien) Courageous vs. Cowardly Harry Potter vs. Peter Pettigrew ( Harry Potter Series by J.K. Rowling) Humble vs. Arrogant Bilbo Baggins vs. Thorin Oakenshield ( The Hobbit by J.R.R. Tolkien) Loyal vs. Untrustworthy Jane Eyre vs. St. John Rivers ( Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë) Determined vs. Indecisive Katniss Everdeen vs. Peeta Mellark ( The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins) Honest vs. Deceitful Elizabeth Bennet vs. George Wickham (Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen) Rational vs. Emotional Sherlock Holmes vs. Dr. John Watson (Sherlock Holmes Series by Arthur Conan Doyle) Generous vs. Stingy Jo March vs. Aunt March ( Little Women by Louisa May Alcott) Reserved vs. Outgoing Fitzwilliam Darcy vs. Charles Bingley ( Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen) Playful vs. Serious Pippin Took vs. Aragorn ( The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien) Naive vs. Cynical Pip vs. Miss Havisham ( Great Expectations by Charles Dickens) Responsible vs. Irresponsible Atticus Finch vs. Bob Ewell ( To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee) Forgiving vs. Vengeful Jean Valjean vs. Inspector Javert ( Les Misérables by Victor Hugo) Principled vs. Corrupt Jon Snow vs. Petyr Baelish ( A Song of Ice and Fire by George R.R. Martin) Meticulous vs. Careless Hercule Poirot vs. Chief Inspector Japp (Agatha Christie Novels) The foil’s contrasting nature can push your protagonist to grow or reveal their inner strengths and weaknesses. Consider how your foil character's presence might force your protagonist to confront uncomfortable truths about themselves. 2. Consider Their Relationship  While it sure does make a damn good story, foil characters don’t always have to be enemies! Consider these options for your tale: Friends with Opposing Traits Friends with contrasting traits can bring out the best (or worst) in each other, revealing hidden strengths and vulnerabilities. The tension can be subtle yet powerful, especially when one friend’s traits compensate for the other's flaws. Allies with Different Approaches Allies who share the same goal but have different methods can create compelling conflict. This dynamic is great for exploring themes like morality, sacrifice, and the greater good. Love Interests Love interests as foils can add layers to romantic tension, allowing both characters to grow and challenge each other in meaningful ways. Use this dynamic to explore themes of acceptance, compromise, and self-improvement. Siblings Sibling foils are ideal for exploring themes of family, loyalty, and identity. Their shared history can deepen the tension between them as they face conflicts in their personalities and choices. Mentor and Protégé A mentor can serve as a foil to the student by pushing them to question their beliefs and encouraging growth. This relationship can explore themes like trust, betrayal, or the cost of ambition. Rivals or Frenemies Rivals who are also foils can push each other to new extremes, revealing hidden strengths or weaknesses. This is great for exploring themes of obsession, ambition, and the thin line between good and evil. Sidekick and Hero A sidekick who acts as a foil can ground the hero or provide a different perspective, highlighting the hero’s strengths or flaws. This dynamic often adds humor, heart, or insight into the story. Parent and Child Parental foils can be used to explore generational conflicts, differing values, or the struggle between tradition and change. Team Members or Colleagues Colleagues who are foils can bring tension to professional settings, highlighting different approaches to solving problems or achieving goals. Strangers Turned Allies Characters who start as strangers but develop a partnership can reveal deeper contrasts as they learn to trust one another. This is perfect for character-driven narratives where relationships evolve over time. Furthermore, foils don't even have to be people/characters! Here are some things that don't even have dialogue! Symbolic Objects that Reflect Inner Conflict An object that contrasts with a character’s values or inner state can act as a foil , highlighting their internal struggle. Example: In The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde, the portrait of Dorian serves as a foil to Dorian himself. While Dorian remains youthful and beautiful, the portrait becomes grotesque, reflecting his corrupt soul. The contrast between the pristine character and the decaying portrait highlights the conflict between appearances and reality. Opposing Objects to Highlight Themes Two objects with opposite meanings can act as foils to highlight thematic contrasts in the story. Example: In Lord of the Flies by William Golding, the conch shell (symbolizing order, civilization, and authority) is contrasted with the pig’s head on a stick (representing chaos, savagery, and the loss of morality). The juxtaposition of these objects underscores the novel’s theme of civilization versus barbarism. Contrasting Personal Belongings Personal items can act as foils to reveal character traits, values, or lifestyles. Example: In Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone , Harry’s simple, secondhand wand contrasts with Draco Malfoy’s sleek, expensive wand. This difference highlights their backgrounds and values—Harry’s humble, modest beginnings versus Draco’s privileged, status-driven upbringing. Settings as Foils Locations or physical spaces can serve as foils to emphasize a character’s emotions or the atmosphere of a scene. Example: In Wuthering Heights by Emily Brontë, Wuthering Heights (wild, chaotic, and untamed) serves as a foil to Thrushcross Grange (peaceful, refined, and orderly). The contrasting settings reflect the temperaments of the characters associated with each location, such as Heathcliff’s raw passion versus the Lintons' gentility. Contrasting Gifts or Mementos Gifts or keepsakes can serve as foils , revealing characters’ intentions or deepening the emotional resonance of a scene. Example: In The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald, Daisy’s pearl necklace (a gift from Tom, representing wealth, status, and entrapment) contrasts with Gatsby’s letter (symbolizing love, hope, and dreams unfulfilled). These items highlight the conflict between love and materialism in Daisy’s life. Technology as a Foil Technology or tools can contrast with a character’s personality or the thematic elements of the story. Example: In Frankenstein by Mary Shelley, Victor Frankenstein’s scientific instruments and the creature he creates serve as foils to nature and human emotion, emphasizing the theme of man versus the natural world. Contrasting Clothing or Accessories Clothing or accessories can serve as foils to reveal contrasts in characters’ personalities or social status. Example: In A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens, Sydney Carton’s disheveled clothing contrasts with Charles Darnay’s neat, respectable attire, highlighting Carton’s inner turmoil and lack of self-worth in contrast to Darnay’s confidence and integrity. "But isn't all this just juxtaposition, Katherine?" you ask. Yeah... technically . While all foils are a type of juxtaposition, not all juxtaposition involves foils . The distinction lies in intention and focus: Foils are used to accentuate specific traits, themes, or qualities by way of direct contrast. Whether it's a character, an object, a setting, or even an abstract idea, a foil is designed to enhance our understanding of another element by presenting an opposing or contrasting aspect. Juxtaposition is broader, focusing on placing two or more things side by side to highlight contrasts or comparisons without necessarily aiming to emphasize one over the other or reveal deeper aspects of another element. Example : In A Tale of Two Cities , Charles Dickens opens with “It was the best of times, it was the worst of times,” juxtaposing contradictory images to emphasize the paradoxical nature of that era. Using objects as foils involves assigning them a symbolic role to directly emphasize something about a character, plot, or theme. In this context, it’s not just about showing a difference but rather using that contrast to enhance understanding of another element: In The Picture of Dorian Gray , the portrait isn't just juxtaposed with Dorian—it’s a foil because it reflects the decay of his soul, making the contrast with his outward appearance deeply significant to the story's themes. The conch shell versus the pig’s head in Lord of the Flies aren’t just juxtaposed; they serve as foils because they represent opposing worldviews (order vs. chaos) that define the conflict among the characters. A quick analogy to help you remember!! Think of juxtaposition as placing two colors side by side —they pop more because of their contrast. Think of a foil as shining a spotlight on one color to show how vibrant it is by placing it next to a duller shade. The purpose of the foil is to make the first color stand out more. Just do your best to not overdo the contrast of the characters/objects. While foils are meant to highlight differences, they should still feel like real people and the situations (even if it's set in a fictional world) should seem likely to happen in your story. Here are some troubleshooting tips for foils : Too Obvious or Overdone Contrast? Problem : The foil is so stark and exaggerated that it becomes unrealistic or feels like a gimmick. The contrast might feel too on-the-nose, and the foil becomes more of a caricature than a nuanced reflection of the main character or theme. Example : A good, honest character paired with an evil, villainous character with no nuance. The contrast is so extreme that neither character feels fully realized. Fix : Make the foil’s traits subtle but distinct. Foils should enhance the complexity of the protagonist and the story, not feel like opposites in a simplistic way. Unnecessary Foils? Problem : Sometimes, writers introduce foils that don’t add much to the story or characters. If the contrast doesn’t reveal something essential about the main character or theme, the foil becomes irrelevant. Example : In a story about a brave adventurer, adding a whiny, cowardly character for the sake of contrast when the adventurer’s bravery is already clearly established could feel forced and unnecessary. Fix : Ensure the foil serves a purpose. The contrast should shed light on something meaningful—whether it’s a character’s growth, hidden traits, or underlying theme. If it doesn’t move the plot or deepen understanding, reconsider the foil . Forced or Inorganic Relationships? Problem : The relationship between the foil and the protagonist feels artificial or contrived, as if the writer is trying too hard to create tension or drama. Example : A heroic figure paired with a completely pessimistic sidekick with no real basis for their partnership. The relationship feels like it was added just to create conflict, but lacks real emotional or thematic weight. Fix : Make sure the foil has a logical or meaningful relationship with the protagonist. Their interactions should feel earned, not forced. The foil should ideally help illuminate aspects of the protagonist that would otherwise remain hidden. Foil is Underdeveloped or One-Dimensional? Problem : The foil itself is not fully realized or lacks depth. If the foil is too shallow or stereotypical, it can weaken the story by reducing the tension or contrast. Example : A cynical, jaded character is paired with a naïve, overly optimistic one, but the cynical character is just a generic, grumpy person with no backstory or reason for their pessimism. Fix : Develop the foil with the same care and depth as the protagonist. The foil should have their own motivations, history, and complexity. The contrast should reveal something profound about both characters. A Foil that Overpowers the Protagonist? Problem : Sometimes a foil can overshadow the protagonist, becoming so interesting or compelling that the main character feels weak or underdeveloped in comparison. Example : A strong-willed, independent character paired with a highly charismatic, powerful foil who steals all the focus. The foil ’s complexity might make the protagonist seem bland or lacking in contrast. Fix : Ensure the protagonist remains the center of attention, with the foil used to highlight specific aspects of their character. The foil should serve to enhance the protagonist’s development, not overshadow it. Inconsistent Foils? Problem : A foil ’s contrast may be inconsistent or arbitrary. This confuses readers instead of adding meaning to the story. Example : A compassionate character is paired with a ruthless character for contrast, but in one scene, the ruthless character acts out of character and is unexpectedly kind. This inconsistency undermines the foil ’s impact. Fix : Stay true to the foil ’s essential traits and ensure their behavior aligns with the larger themes or conflicts. Consistency is key to making the foil a meaningful counterpart. Overuse of Foils? Problem : Using too many foils in a story can dilute their effectiveness. When too many characters or objects are set up as foils to the protagonist, it can overwhelm the reader and weaken the contrast. Example : A protagonist has several foils , such as a friend, a romantic partner, a mentor, and even an object or setting, all trying to highlight different aspects of their character. This can be confusing or excessive. Fix : Focus on one or two carefully chosen foils that serve the narrative. Too many foils can diminish the emotional impact of each, so use them strategically to bring out the qualities you most want to highlight. Foils that Aren’t Actually Contrasting? Problem : The foil isn’t truly opposite or contrasting to the protagonist, which makes the relationship fall flat. The foil should highlight the differences, not just be a supporting character. Example : A confident leader paired with a shy, introspective leader who doesn’t really act as a foil because their qualities don’t contrast in a way that reveals anything significant about the other. Fix : Ensure there is a clear contrast between the two characters, objects, or ideas. The difference should highlight something important about the protagonist and their journey. No matter the genre, incorporating foils can be the secret ingredient that brings your characters to life. Using foils allows writers to explore character dynamics in a way that straightforward narration cannot. It’s a subtle yet powerful tool for deepening character development, revealing hidden depths, and exploring themes like morality, identity, and transformation. Let the contrasts guide your story and see where it takes you! May your foil character not be foiled ! Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Coffee and Baristas - Part Two

    Introduction In Part Two  of this two-part series, Alex, the experienced coffee shop manager, continues sharing insights into the coffee world. From dealing with customers and navigating the unique culture of a coffee shop to tips for aspiring baristas, Alex dives deep into the nitty-gritty of barista life. He touches on everything from sensory environments and managing chaos, to building relationships with regulars and dealing with tough shifts. If you’ve ever wondered about the day-to-day operations of a coffee shop, the skills you need to thrive as a barista, or what goes into making a perfect latte, this episode is full of rich, aromatic content to satisfy your curiosity. Here's the link to this specific podcast episode on my website.  Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! Timestamps 00:00:48 What movies or TV shows or songs or other media get what you do correct? 00:02:16 Do you agree with a lot of stereotypes? 00:07:23 Overhearing a lot of hot goss in the shop 00:08:05 Is your team pretty gossipy? 00:08:32 Does the soundscape of your work environment influence your productivity or creativity? 00:08:38 If it's really noisy, are you able to make coffee no problem? 00:09:51 How do you curate a playlist for the shop? 00:12:34 How important is verbal communication with guests and also with your team? 00:14:03 What's the difference between a cappuccino and a latte? 00:15:39 Do you have an acute sense of hearing for certain problems? 00:17:30 What's the typical dress code? 00:18:51 Do you have a love-hate relationship with any of the appliances? 00:20:56 What's the science with tamping? 00:22:42 Do coffee beans or grounds have a distinct feeling or tactile characteristic that you look for? 00:23:36 Is it true that if you roast it longer, there's less caffeine? 00:24:50 What makes a good pour over? 00:26:53 Do you have anything that you reach for comfort at the coffee shop? 00:28:00 In an increasingly digital world, how do you balance the virtual and physical realms of your work? 00:30:48 Do you have any immediate thoughts on tipping? 00:34:42 Let's talk about some coffee temperatures. 00:35:12 If something, like if an espresso shot was pulled poorly, like it's too sour or something, is there any saving that with the other ingredients with the drinks that you put in? 00:37:07 What gets you excited about working at the shop? 00:37:21 What about it drains your energy? 00:38:54 What's in the refrigerator of a coffee barista? 00:40:34 Let's talk about dairy and dairy alternatives. 00:42:52 Do any scents or flavors when you're outside of the shop trigger you into feeling like you're back in the shop? 00:45:57 Is there something where like this box of X, Y, Z has been here for like way too long because you never use it? 00:46:20 When you make your syrups, what's the process with that? 00:47:32 The term third place originates from a 1989 book called The Great Good Place by sociologist Ray Oldenburg…Are there challenges or considerations that you make related to maintaining a balanced sensory environment? 00:50:10 What sort of work do you see people doing there? 00:51:05 If you were to make a candle representing your coffee shop, what fragrances would it have? 00:52:59 Murphy's Law states that anything that can go wrong will go wrong. What is something that perhaps is often overlooked or forgotten when it comes to operating a coffee shop? 00:53:54 Is there less coffee drinking in the summer versus the winter? 00:54:40 Is it safe to assume that in the summer and the hot months, more ice drinks are going to be made, and then in the winter, in the colder months, more hot drinks are going to be made? 00:56:15 Do you notice perhaps the younger demographic getting more sweet drinks compared to the older demographic getting more robust drinks? 00:56:59 How has your intuition evolved or grown as you've gained experience with the shop? 00:58:12 What is something that you had to learn on the job? 00:58:41 Did you have advice from people or is that learning on the job? 00:59:09 What's a sign that a day is going to go well? 00:59:26 What's a sign that the day is going to go badly? 00:59:43 Shift Change and Schedules  01:02:02 Do you have any advice for individuals who are aspiring to be a barista entering the world of coffee shops? 01:03:41 Where can one find more information about baristas and or coffee shops? 01:05:08 Do you notice that Detroit does their coffee a certain way? 01:05:55 How important is networking or building professional relationships within the industry? 01:07:02 What strategies have you found effective for nurturing these connections? 01:08:42 How many times does one visit a coffee shop before they become a regular? 01:09:13 So what is something that you think most people working in coffee shops might like changed about the industry? 01:11:19 What did it take 10,000 hours for you to learn about coffee or coffee shops? 01:11:58 If there was a latte art specifically for your shop, what do you think that it would look like? 01:12:59 Was latte art always a thing or has this like started within the last few years? 01:14:01 When reading books and journals from 30 years ago, even like 10 years ago, there's bound to be out of date tools or terminology…Regarding baristas, coffee, coffee shops, the whole gamut…Have you seen much change in what's happened? 01:14:44 Going off the question regarding things going out of date, what is something that is probably future proof? 01:16:03 Do you have any [espresso machine] brands in mind that you might recommend? 01:16:24 If you read (blank) in a book about coffee, baristas, coffee shop, whatever, if you read blank, you would know that the author did their research. 01:17:11 If somebody wasn't in this field, they would never believe what? Key Takeaways: Coffee shop culture is multisensory (by design!) Curated playlists. The hiss of steam wands. The scent of syrups. The café soundscape isn’t accidental. Alex speaks to how sensory awareness affects workflow, creativity, and guest comfort. Gossip, guest talk, and shop-floor sociology Baristas overhear it all! They know you've been flirting, venting and spilling the tea. This constant stream of social input shapes not just the vibe of the space, but team dynamics and emotional boundaries behind the counter. Taste and texture are tactile skills Crafting a perfect drink involves more than taste. From tamp pressure to grind feel, baristas develop sensory intuition that can’t be taught in a manual. It can only be refined through hours of lived practice. Comfort rituals matter in a fast-paced space Amid the rush, baristas often reach for familiar comforts: a favorite mug, a steady playlist, even a well-worn towel. These small rituals offer moments of grounding in an environment defined by constant motion and sensory overload. The job evolves and you have to evolve with it Technology, trends, and even terminology shift over time. Alex speaks about intuition as a professional tool. He works on recognizing regulars’ moods, adapting on the fly, and embracing a craft that is never static. Editor's Note: In Part Two of the Coffee and Baristas  series, Katherine continues her conversation with Alex, exploring deeper layers of café culture—from the science of tamping and the psychology of tipping, to the hidden codes of communication between coworkers and regulars. Writers looking to go beyond surface-level depictions will find an abundance of character cues here: how playlists shape a space, what scents trigger memories, why baristas develop superhuman hearing, and how intuition grows with time on the bar. It’s a study in presence and perception, grounded in a place that’s equal parts workplace, social hub, and personal refuge. If you’re writing about connection, tension, or the unspoken rules of public-yet-personal spaces, this episode delivers the details that breathe life into every cup and conversation. Enjoy the brew! Links & Resources: Barista Guild  - For aspiring baristas, check out education and research programs Serious Eats' take on the Best Espresso Machines Part One of this Series Continue to "espresso" yourself, Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Coffee and Baristas - Part One

    Introduction In Part One of this warm and frothy two-part series, Katherine cozies up with Alex, the operating manager of her favorite local coffee shop. Alex brings several years of experience in the coffee world to the table—along with a few unforgettable stories. From deciphering complicated espresso orders to watching romances (and breakups) unfold over cappuccinos, this episode captures the full flavor of life behind the bar. They talk third wave coffee, customer quirks, latte art, and what it really means to build a community over caffeine. If you’re a writer curious about people-watching in cafes or someone who just loves the hum of espresso machines and the ritual of a good brew, this episode is your next great listen. Here's the link to this specific podcast episode on my website.  Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! Timestamps 00:01:21 But when and how did you get involved in this field? 00:02:08 Third wave, what does that mean? 00:02:38 So did you ever see yourself doing this beforehand, like getting into the coffee? 00:04:10 Intro of “Fact or Fiction” 00:04:30 Is it common for you to have regulars who come in daily and spend hours at the shop? 00:06:41 As the proverbial Gunther, the owner of Central Park, what sort of relationships do you get to foster with the regulars? 00:08:22 Do customers claim specific tables or spots in the shop that are their own or are there like regulars that only sit in like the corner spot that you know, you got to have that table ready? 00:10:22 Does weather affect the shop? 00:13:03 Have you ever had customers request to perform or sing or bring something out of the Ordinary to the shop? 00:13:58 What are the hours of your shop? 00:15:20 Have you witnessed romantic encounters in your cafe, and are there any first dates, proposals, or awkward breakups that just really stick out? 00:18:59 How long do customers usually hang out there, and what's the longest anybody has ever stayed? 00:22:22 Karens 00:24:41 Do you ever have customers that come in without ordering things? 00:26:46 Has there ever been a situation where a regular customer ended up working at the café or helping out behind the counter? 00:30:01 Do people ever use your shop to celebrate parties or anything? 00:31:02 Have you or any of your coworkers ever had a crush on a regular customer or noticed customers crushing on each other? 00:33:06 What is the most complex or strange coffee order you have ever had to make? 00:37:00 Do you know [people] by, like, their coffee order? 00:37:26 What's “single origin”? 00:38:25 Have there been any memorable accidents, spills, or other incidents in your cafe that felt like something out of a sitcom? 00:42:26 Have you had any local town celebrities or influencers come in? 00:46:32 Do you ever give away free drinks to regulars or under special circumstances? 00:48:26 Do you ever have to cut people off from coffee? 00:51:29 When you said for a certain amount of time for the espresso pulls, what is that? 00:52:13 What does it mean to adjust the grind? 00:55:28 Would anything on your body give away that you work at a coffee shop? 00:56:48 Latte Art  00:58:23 What does a rosetta look like, and what does a stack look like? 00:59:10 Are there elements that are in, like, a certain coffee drink where you know that a rosetta or a stack is just not going to turn up? 01:00:24 Are there people that take drinks that aren't theirs? 01:02:10 Is there a preferred order or way in which you would appreciate the order being asked for? 01:07:05 And are the codes that you use, are they pretty standard? 01:08:47 I went out of my way to see what the most complicated order at Starbucks could be. Key Takeaways: Third wave coffee is about intention, not trend From bean to brew, this movement focuses on quality, sustainability, and craftsmanship. Coffee is less like a commodity and more like wine or cuisine. There is respect for sourcing, roasting, and the ritual of preparation. Baristas are cultural anchors Baristas are more than a person behind the counter. They often become steady presences in their customers’ daily lives. Baristas are more like confidants, local historians, mood-setters, and sometimes the most consistent part of someone’s week. Customers shape the atmosphere Alex shares stories ranging from rude entitlement to deeply human moments. One minute it’s complaints about oat milk foam, the next minute it’s a regular opening up about a job loss. Coffee culture is emotional labor in disguise. Behind every pour is quiet mastery Latte art might look casual, but it reflects deep skill. I'm talking tamp pressure, microfoam technique... Crafting espresso drinks is a mix of science, repetition, and muscle memory. It’s physical, mental, and artistic work—done fast. Coffee shops are full of unscripted stories Baristas witness it all: first dates, quiet breakups, book club meetings, and lives unfolding in real time. Cafés are rich with narrative tension, accidental poetry, and the kind of overheard dialogue writers dream about. Editor's Note: If you’ve ever posted up in a coffee shop to write, you already know there’s a rhythm to the place—a cast of characters, a vibe that shifts with the seasons. This episode peels back the curtain with humor and heart, giving us a glimpse of what it’s like to live on the other  side of the espresso machine. If you're scripting a scene behind the counter or trying to understand what drives someone to pour hundreds of perfect drinks a day, this episode is rich with tactile detail. From soundscapes and team dynamics to the choreography of the espresso machine, it’s a goldmine for building authentic characters or sensory-rich environments that feel lived-in and real. For writers looking to better understand dialogue, human behavior, or just spark their creativity in unexpected places, this is an audio goldmine. Links & Resources: What Is Third Wave Coffee? from Perfect Daily Grind Latte Art Tutorial by Emilee Bryant on YouTube Buzzfeed's thoughts on Complicated Starbucks Orders How to Adjust Coffee Grind Size by Java Presse Should You Write in a Coffee Shop? by RemoteWriting.com Dr. Sunalini Menon: The Sprudge Twenty Interview in the Sprudge Interview Series Part Two of this Series May your dialogue flow like a perfect pour-over, Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Playing in a Band - Part One

    Introduction In this episode, Katherine chats with Dave, a guitarist who’s been playing since the age of fourteen. With experience in eight different bands, Dave gives Katherine (and listeners) a deep dive into the real-life dynamics of playing in a band. Ranging from managing multiple projects to the highs and lows of live performances, this episode uncovers what it’s really like to be part of a band. If you're a musician yourself or if you're writing about a character in a band, or just curious, you’ll walk away with fresh insights into the world of live music. Ready to rock? Let’s dive in! Here's the link to this specific podcast episode on my website. Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! TIMESTAMPS 00:02:21 What is in the fridge of a guy who plays in a cover band? 00:04:23 How does one divide your time amongst one band, let alone two? 00:04:27 How is that for your schedule and working a full-time job? 00:08:18 Are there pros and cons to the cover band in which you can, you know, you know what the sounds are gonna be like. 00:08:34 Is there any sort of downside to having both things going on at the same time? 00:12:28 What is it like as the entertainer aspect of playing in the cover band? 00:12:34 What is it like playing to the audience in that way? 00:15:23 What makes a great night? 00:17:21 What's a clean tone? 00:23:07 What does it mean to be tone-oriented? 00:25:57 A word from our sponsor. 00:26:32 What's a bad night? 00:27:51 How do you down tune? 00:32:09 How long were these tours? 00:35:05 Do you feel the high adrenaline, you know, during the show? 00:35:09 Do you feel the low sort of post show? 00:35:14 What are the emotions that you've had to come to terms with when playing as you do? 00:41:22 What's the difference between what you show them and what you're not ready to, you just want to keep it to yourself. 00:43:59 Do you find yourself becoming friends with people that understand kind of the social culture of playing in a band, that when you're away, it will take you some time to process once you're back from a tour. 00:44:18 Do you kind of have to be with friends with people that are also in bands or in bands adjacent? 00:53:47 So what's this community like? 00:54:09 Have you acquired this knowledge through all of this playing that you've done? 00:54:15 Have you acquired this knowledge specifically because Paper Covers Rock is a 90s band, and you kind of have to know the history? 00:56:50 What was it like to tell your parents? Key Takeaways: Audience response shapes the show Dave shares how the energy of a crowd can dramatically alter a performance. The connection between artist and audience is active and immediate, influencing not just mood, but how the music is delivered. Great performances often come from this live, reciprocal exchange. Performing creates emotional highs and lows The adrenaline of performing is intense—but what follows can be just as powerful. Dave reflects on the emotional crash that can come post-show, highlighting a common but often unspoken aspect of creative work: the physiological toll of giving so much, so quickly. Vulnerability is part of the craft Live performance invites emotional exposure, but Dave discusses the importance of intentional boundaries. There’s a conscious choice in what you share and what you hold back, and that curation is part of what makes performance both personal and sustainable. A bad night is still meaningful Not every gig lands—and that’s part of the process. Whether it’s due to tech issues or off energy, Dave reframes “bad” shows as instructive rather than discouraging. Each one offers feedback, helping performers grow in skill, awareness, and adaptability. Community sustains the musician’s life Musicians often find deep connection with others in the scene. Dave speaks to the unspoken understanding among peers—the ease of being with people who know the demands of performing. These bonds offer more than support—they make the work possible. Editor’s Note: As a writer, there’s something really fascinating about peeling back the layers of what it’s like to be part of a band. This episode is exactly that—it’s an honest, behind-the-scenes look into the life of a musician. And, I’ll admit, it’s one of those episodes that made me want to keep listening just to hear more about the balance between creativity, chaos, and connection that comes with being in a band. Dave’s experience gives us a peek into the emotional and logistical sides of band life— juggling multiple projects, the adrenaline of live shows, and that post-performance crash we’ve all heard about. It’s easy to imagine the “rockstar life” from the outside, but Dave makes it clear that there’s more to it than the cool persona— it’s about managing people, expectations, and most of all, your own energy. As someone who writes about people’s stories, I’m always on the lookout for that blend of truth and vulnerability, and this episode definitely delivers. If you’ve ever been curious about what it’s like to balance the thrill of the stage with the everyday grind, or even what happens when a show goes bad , this episode really pulls you into that world. And, if you’re a fellow creative, there’s so much to take away about the emotional side of performing and how it connects to what we do as writers, artists, and creators. But don’t get too comfortable! Part Two promises to go even deeper, and we’ll be exploring more of Dave’s journey through the lens of his musical knowledge and personal growth. So, stick around, because this conversation is far from over! Links & Resources: Check out Jackson and the Poolsharks on their website , Spotify , Apple Music , and Instagram . More info on down-tuning your guitar? Check out this guide . Listen to Part Two from the "Playing in a Band" series here . Keep the music alive, Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Cults - Part Three

    Introduction In the final part of this candid and emotionally resonant series, Katherine sits down with our anonymous guest  for a wide-ranging conversation on reclaiming life, identity, and freedom after leaving a cult. Through reflection, analysis, and moments of both levity and gravity, they explore what comes after escape: the long process of unlearning, healing, and re-entering the world. This episode dives into pop culture, spirituality, horror as catharsis, and what documentaries get right—and wrong—about cult life. You’ll hear powerful reflections on trust, autonomy, and the ongoing journey of writing a new story after surviving a system of control. Here's a link to the podcast episode on my website.  Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! Time Stamps: 00:01:32  What other gossip was happening amongst the church? 00:02:38  You said a hundred people. Was there like a flow of there was a minimum, there was a maximum? 00:03:15  Was it ever discouraged going to the doctor? 00:04:05  Tell me more about healing hands. 00:04:47  Were there some church members that were a little louder than others? 00:05:35  Was that truly believed to a level of, like, yes, women are healers, but God is ultimate? 00:06:52  Is Aunt Bessie a reference to something? 00:08:40 Was it just God or was there like the Trinity of God, Jesus, and the Holy Spirit? 00:09:40  What were you able to watch as a kid? 00:10:40  Once you were out, and you could watch relatively anything, how did that feel? 00:12:15  Are there any [bible] verses that you might still hold close to you because you like them? 00:14:38  What was it like regaining your freedom of choice? 00:16:11  Did you have to learn how to trust yourself? 00:17:43 What's the difference between a cult and a military? 00:19:29  Did you find comfort being in the military after your experience in the cult? 00:21:18  When you say that you're learning this dark humor, how does that come about? 00:23:27  What tactics have you utilized to get the pop culture refresh into your brain? 00:24:32  What is it about horror that you're able to enjoy? 00:27:32  Were there ever doomsday prophecies with the cult? 00:29:03  You and I have watched a few documentaries on Cults, the Twin Flames documentary, the Keep Sweet and Obey documentary. What about these documentaries do you feel get it right? 00:34:07  “As to what the documentaries got wrong, I can't speak to too much because every cult is different.” 00:35:05  Would you like to see something being made about the cult that you were a part of? 00:36:38  ”Anybody could fall victim to a cult.” 00:37:44  What traits would that leader have to have? 00:38:28 What resources would you suggest writers utilize to better write about Cults, either fictional or realistic, in their own writing? 00:39:34  If I were to only watch one documentary to get that cultness through, what would it be? 00:41:15  What is the best way to heal from a cult experience? 00:44:54  What might you want to say to somebody listening who is questioning the organization that they are currently in, that it may also be of a cult persuasion? Key Takeaways: Reclaiming agency takes time: Freedom isn’t just physical—it's emotional, creative, and cultural. Healing can look like horror: Pop culture and dark humor provide surprising comfort when survivors reframe their trauma. Cults are not all the same: While patterns exist, each group carries unique methods of control and belief systems. Media representation matters: Survivors are watching, listening, and weighing what’s accurate and what misses the mark. Survival does not end the story: Leaving is only one part of the journey. Recovery, reflection, and redefining yourself takes a lifetime. Editor's Notes: The end of a series like this is never really an end.  For writers exploring trauma, survival, or systems of control, what you hear in this episode may echo into your own creative process—your characters, your themes, your pacing, or even your inner life. This episode is a reminder that survivors don’t owe their stories, but when they choose to share them, it’s a gift. As a writer, it’s your responsibility to meet that gift with clarity, care, and caution. The truth is: cults don’t always look extreme from the inside. Sometimes, they look like family. Like faith. Like structure. That nuance matters. If you're writing about characters with these experiences—fictional or real—ask yourself not just what  they survived, but how  they keep living. How do they rediscover joy, humor, love? What makes them more than what they endured? Stories like this aren’t just exposés—they’re emotional blueprints. Use them wisely, use them well, and check in with yourself often. Writing from dark places doesn’t mean you have to stay there. Links & Resources: Support Groups People Leave Cults : offers information and services for cult intervention, cult recovery, and cult support groups. They serve current and former cult members, their family, friends, and loved ones Cult Recovery 101 : Has an excellent directory of organizations for cult recovery The National Association of Forensic Counselors  has extensive Information on Cults and Support for Former Cult Members   Books on Cults & High-Control Groups (For Research & Inspiration) "Cultish: The Language of Fanaticism" by Amanda Montell  – A deep dive into how language is used to manipulate and control within cults and cult-like organizations. "The Gift of Fear" by Gavin de Becker  – Explores how manipulation and control tactics work, especially in coercive environments. "A Thousand Lives: The Untold Story of Hope, Deception, and Survival at Jonestown" by Julia Scheeres  – A well-researched account of one of history’s most infamous cults. "Recovering Agency: Lifting the Veil of Mormon Mind Control" by Luna Lindsey  – Focuses on mind control techniques within religious groups, applicable for understanding coercion in storytelling. Writing Guides & Storytelling Resources "The Writer’s Guide to Psychology" by Carolyn Kaufman  – Helps writers accurately depict psychological manipulation and trauma. Sensitivity Reader Directories  – If a writer wants to ensure they’re handling cult survivors’ experiences respectfully, a sensitivity reader can help. Consider having a reader look through your story to ensure you're hitting the right chords without doing any damage. International Cultic Studies Association  has an online library  of articles, book reviews, periodicals, and plenty other resources divided by topics including (but definitely not limited to)  Born or Raised in Cultic Groups (SGAs)  , Cultic Therapies , Cults 101 , Ethical Issues , Families , Former Group Members , Government and Public Policy ,   Personal Accounts , Political Cultism , and Social Influence . Truth echoes long after escape, Katherine Arkady

  • Podcast Episode Summary: Cults - Part Two

    Introduction In Part Two of Takes One to Write One: Cults , Katherine sits down again with her anonymous guest as they dig deeper into life inside a high-control religious group. This episode explores the long-term impact of spiritual abuse, how loyalty was weaponized, and what happens when someone begins to question everything they’ve ever been taught. Together, they unpack relationships, identity, and the emotional unraveling that often follows the first steps toward freedom. It’s an honest, intense, and insightful look into the psychological grip these groups can have—even long after someone leaves. Trigger warnings include trauma, spiritual and emotional abuse, psychological manipulation, and suicidal ideation. Please listen with care. Here's a link to the podcast episode on my website.   Listen to the podcast on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, and all other major platforms! Timestamps 00:01:26 What differences did you notice in these “biblified” holidays?  00:03:41 What were birthdays like? 00:04:13 Speaking of siblings and their names from the bible… 00:05:50 And y'all could have pets like typical household families? 00:08:44 To have siblings that weren't around for the cult, that are growing up in a different way. How do you feel about that? 00:10:24 You touched on the sex education or rather lack of. Is that the only way —abstinence? 00:11:53 Was there any talk about the health of like, hey, you're, this is what happens with puberty? 00:13:18 What is in the Bible regarding menstruation? 00:15:51 Did you experience other women in the church being pregnant? 00:18:21 You mentioned at five years old, you knew who you were, quote unquote, destined to marry. Did you have a friendship with the person, or relationship? 00:20:02 What sex education do you suppose the guys got? 00:21:56 “I know one of the guys that assaulted me, assaulted one of my sisters.” 00:22:33 Is that out of shame that you didn't share with each other? 00:24:09 So now that you're not involved, and you exited, what was the removal process like for you? 00:26:45 You mentioned earlier how overwhelming it was to be in the greater world of things. How did you cope with that? 00:29:16 “I never even saw the r*pes as r*pe until I was in college.” 00:33:14 So when you were trying one of every [drug], did you find answers out of those experiences? 00:35:23 What was ultimately something that really helped you start the healing? 00:36:39 This may have been weeks ago, perhaps an off comment, where you were figuring out like, there's not a hell, there's not this, there's not, and it was like, your whole belief system was crashing around you. How long did that take to get over? 00:38:13 “Since the day I was born, I was told these shoulders are going to send me to hell.” 00:39:35 Tell me more about you looking into Greek mythologies. 00:44:32 “I have struggled with s*icid*l ideation adhesion since leaving the cult because suicide is a sin, according to the Bible and according to the cult.” 00:46:13 Is an identity crisis the right term to use for that? 00:46:49 Do you find more solace from talking to folk that were also involved in cults, or do you find more solace from folk that have never been in cults? 00:50:08 So these claims, it seems very your word against everybody else's. Does stuff like this get caught in that rumor mill and all of the gossip? Key Takeaways: Control over identity begins early: Our guest shares how even holidays, names, and pets were shaped by rigid doctrine, creating a totalizing worldview. Sex education was absent or harmful: Conversations about bodies, puberty, and relationships were filtered through shame and silence, leading to confusion and trauma. Trauma is often redefined in hindsight: The guest discusses realizing in college that their experiences were abusive, even though they had been normalized. Healing is layered: From experimenting with substances to exploring mythology, rebuilding belief systems and self-identity is nonlinear—but possible. There is strength in speaking: Naming harm out loud, especially in the face of rumor mills and denial, is part of reclaiming truth and power. Editor's Note: As a writer, it’s powerful—and often emotionally risky—to sit with stories like this. Interviews that dive into trauma, coercion, and identity loss are not just research; they become echoes we carry. Listening, transcribing, editing—each step asks us to hold space for someone else’s pain, and sometimes it stirs our own. You might find yourself haunted by a particular quote, pausing longer than usual, or needing a break after writing a few lines. That doesn’t mean you’re doing it wrong. It means you’re honoring the story. This episode, like many others in this series, exists in that emotional gray zone between survival and storytelling, harm and healing. As you create from or reflect on this space, remember: it’s okay to feel heavy. It’s okay to step away. You don’t owe anyone your detachment. Let this story remind you that writing is an act of presence, not perfection. That telling someone else’s truth—especially when it’s raw and complex—requires empathy, boundaries, and a deep respect for what isn’t yours to resolve. If you’re a writer working on something similar: take breaks. Reconnect to joy. Seek support when you need it. And always, always ask yourself: Am I writing with care, or just writing to finish? You’re allowed to feel this. You’re allowed to protect your peace. And you’re still a storyteller even when you need to rest. Links & Resources: Support Groups People Leave Cults : offers information and services for cult intervention, cult recovery, and cult support groups. They serve current and former cult members, their family, friends, and loved ones Cult Recovery 101 : Has an excellent directory of organizations for cult recovery The National Association of Forensic Counselors  has extensive Information on Cults and Support for Former Cult Members   Books on Cults & High-Control Groups (For Research & Inspiration) "Cultish: The Language of Fanaticism" by Amanda Montell  – A deep dive into how language is used to manipulate and control within cults and cult-like organizations. "The Gift of Fear" by Gavin de Becker  – Explores how manipulation and control tactics work, especially in coercive environments. "A Thousand Lives: The Untold Story of Hope, Deception, and Survival at Jonestown" by Julia Scheeres  – A well-researched account of one of history’s most infamous cults. "Recovering Agency: Lifting the Veil of Mormon Mind Control" by Luna Lindsey  – Focuses on mind control techniques within religious groups, applicable for understanding coercion in storytelling. Writing Guides & Storytelling Resources "The Writer’s Guide to Psychology" by Carolyn Kaufman  – Helps writers accurately depict psychological manipulation and trauma. Sensitivity Reader Directories  – If a writer wants to ensure they’re handling cult survivors’ experiences respectfully, a sensitivity reader can help. Consider having a reader look through your story to ensure you're hitting the right chords without doing any damage. International Cultic Studies Association  has an online library  of articles, book reviews, periodicals, and plenty other resources divided by topics including (but definitely not limited to)  Born or Raised in Cultic Groups (SGAs)  , Cultic Therapies , Cults 101 , Ethical Issues , Families , Former Group Members , Government and Public Policy ,   Personal Accounts , Political Cultism , and Social Influence . And they hold conferences! Coping With Cult Involvement: A Handbook for Families and Friends  (Second Edition) by Livia Bardin, M.S.W. If you or somebody you know is struggling with suicidal ideation, there is help. The national " 988 " Suicide and Crisis Lifeline can be called or texted and is available 24/7/365. Your conversations are free and confidential. https://988lifeline.org/ Write with care. Listen with heart, Katherine Arkady

  • Self Care for Writers: Getting a Little "Woo Woo"

    Introduction My pen is strong, my voice sincere, Imagination—crystal clear. I write with passion—lucidity, My pen is strong. So mote it be. Through the course of writing as much as I have, I've written about some pretty witchy characters. As my entire brand goes, it takes a witch to write a witch. I've picked up on many practices, my favorite of which: mantras like the above. But that's not all! The joy of the craft is that there are no hard and fast rules. You practice what calls you and you can literally make it up as you go. A lot like writing, huh? ** Important Note : This is not a post to convert. This is not a post to spook. This  is,  however, a post to inform and create some conversation about how the metaphysical can still get real. Let's explore some holistic and alternative self care practices that can help writers with creativity blocks, reduce stress, and reconnect to their writing flow. Manifesting and Affirmation Rituals In witchy terms: Manifesting and affirmation rituals harness the power of intention and energy to attract from the universe what you desire into your life. By focusing on your creative goals through candles, sigils, or spoken affirmations, you’re essentially casting a spell to bring inspiration and productivity your way. Adding science to the mix: Manifesting and affirmations work by using the brain's neuroplasticity. You essentially reprogram your brain to focus on positive outcomes. Repeating affirmations and visualizing success strengthens neural pathways, boosts confidence, motivation, and creative flow. Distilled down, manifesting and affirmations are a way to keep you focused and feeling good about the power you have over your life. But what do you say? Anything that specifically calls to you. Here are some "generic" mindset anchors that are perfectly useful. "I trust my creative instincts.” "My pen is strong and my voice is sincere." " There’s a great story inside that I need to get out, and I know how to do it." "If someone doesn’t like what I write, that is their problem and not mine." "My written word is how others see me, so I will improve how I see myself. " " I am focused, disciplined, and dedicated to my writing goals." " I am committed to improving my craft every day." Tailor these to your specific journey. Do you want to increase your productivity? Do you want to be more creative? Do you want to overcome self-doubt and boost confidence? Ask yourself these questions to see what you need to tell yourself. Write the affirmations down on sticky notes around your workspace or repeat them aloud each morning. Scribble them on your mirrors, your thermos', notebooks, laptop etc etc. You want to see it. You want to repeat it. You want to live it. As for manifesting, write down your specific goals. Like finding a literary agent. Finishing a manuscript. Finishing a   chapter.  Whatever it is, write it down so it's out of your head and into the very real world. Visualize every detail of getting that goal. Where do you want to see yourself with the goal attained? Write that down as well. The visualization helps to reinforce your commitment. This manifesting can help you endure the tough spots. I bought this gorgeous cheese tray with a cloche to cover the cheese. It's meant or entertaining but this witch can get creative. I taped strips of paper with my affirmations inside of this cloche and set the tray on my bedside table. Each morning after rest and each evening before rest, I would lift the cloche and speak the affirmations into it. Silly as it may be, I felt I was building up the good energy I had in myself for a time I needed it. And, when that time came, I opened the cloche and visualized all my good words and energy being released back into me. "Yeah but does it work, Katherine?" you ask. You ever see   Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest?  Jack is seeking help from Tia Dalma in order to protect himself from Davy Jones: Tia Dalma:  Davy Jones cannot make port. Cannot step on land but once every ten years. Land is where you are safe, Jack Sparrow, and so you will carry land with you. Jack Sparrow:  ...Dirt. This is a jar of dirt. Tia Dalma:  Yes. Jack Sparrow:  Is the jar of dirt going to help? Tia Dalma:  If you don't want it, give it back. Jack Sparrow:  No. Tia Dalma:  Then it helps. Find a way to make your own jar of dirt work to protect you from the nasty imposter syndromes, rejections, and overall struggle of being a writer. It works if you work it. Forest Bathing Forest bathing, also known as " shinrin-yoku " in Japan, involves immersing yourself in nature to rejuvenate the senses. Walking in a natural setting, be it a park, forest, or beach, can lower cortisol levels, reduce anxiety, and even improve creativity. Spending time among trees and fresh air,  without digital distractions , can help reset your mind. I suggest getting (safely) lost in a forest that you're generally familiar with. And when I say lost, I mean that you lose the weight of reality and exist in nature. ALWAYS practice proper safety precautions: tell somebody where you'll be, bring water and snacks, wear proper clothing according to the weather, stay on the trail, and use common sense. And then stay lost for a little while. Feel what it's like to be one with the trees. Take in the forest's smells and breathe in the fresh air that the wise creatures offer you. Walk firmly on the ever-changing ground and be intentional with stopping and bathing in the views. Listen to the birds and other critters exist safely under the canopy. Touch the trees and fallen leaves. Feel the flora on the forest floor. Do all of these things, but, above ALL:   take only memories; leave only footprints. Ritual Bath for Releasing Creative Blocks There’s something inherently soothing about slipping into a warm bath after a long day. And what if you could elevate that experience? May I introduce to you the ritual bath—a mindful, intention-setting practice that can help you release creative blocks, alleviate stress, and reconnect with your inner muse. For writers, who often find themselves drained by the mental and emotional effort of their craft, a ritual bath can serve as both a self-care routine and a creative recharge. Sure, you'll get your physical body clean, but the ritual cleans your spiritual body.   It's all about intention.  What do you want to focus on during this ritual? Removing writer's block? Inviting more creative energy? Steeping in a complicated storyline until your plot holes show themselves? Releasing the imposter syndrome holding you back? Inviting the opportunity to get a literary agent? Think about this main intention while cleaning your bathroom. Cleanse the space of any physical grime so it doesn't distract you from cleansing your spiritual grime. Next, pretty up the area around your massive, porcelain cauldron with candles, crystals, flowers, and other items that will bring forth the energy you wish to have around you. And don't forget music! Here are three suggestions of what to include: 1. Unblocking Creativity & Finding Inspiration Purpose:  Clear creative blockages with this bath and spark new ideas to help you tap into a flow of writing inspiration. Affirmation:   “I am a vessel for endless inspiration. Ideas flow to me effortlessly and freely.” Candles: Use yellow or orange candles for creativity and mental clarity. Consider scented options like citrus or bergamot to uplift your mood. Crystals: Place an amethyst (for creativity), moonstone (for strengthening self worth), and smoky quartz (for keeping you present and enhancing ability to work through internal conflicts) around the tub. And, since salt is a crystal, we can't forget epsom salts/ magnesium sulfate. Add at least a cup into the bathwater  to cleanse the negativity away and reap the relaxing benefits of magnesium. Oils: Add a few drops of rosemary (for mental focus), peppermint (for mental clarity), or sweet orange (for uplifting energy) to your bathwater. Flowers/ Herbs: Boil a soup pot with rosemary and lemons. Once thoroughly steeped, strain out plant material and then pour this tea into the bath for an excellent base. Music: Play soft instrumental tracks like lo-fi beats or ambient soundscapes that encourage deep thinking without distraction. An ambient track that I consistently recommend wasn't originally an ambient track. U Smile by Justin Bieber--stay with me--slowed down to 800% is a creation I can only summarize as   ethereal . Half an hour long. Sounds like celestial waves. Ethereal. 2. Releasing Self-Doubt & Embracing Confidence Purpose : You can letting go of self-doubt and boost your confidence with this one. It's perfect for those struggling with imposter syndrome or writer's block. Affirmation : “I release all self-doubt. I trust in my abilities and embrace my unique creative voice.” Candles: Use gold or white candles to symbolize self-empowerment and clarity. Opt for scented candles like ylang-ylang or frankincense for grounding. Crystals: Place hematite (for grounding and energy circulation), carnelian (for confidence and motivation), and rose quartz (for self-love) near the bath. Flowers: Only one thing beats the beauty of a rose--a bouquet of roses. Treat yourself to beauty as you help yourself become more beautiful too. Fun fact according to   Witchipedia : " The Latin term  Sub rosa , or "beneath the rose" references secrecy. A rose hung from a ceiling indicates that anything that takes place beneath it should be held in the utmost confidence." So go ahead and hang a rose above the bath. Tell the rose and bathwater your secrets or deepest thoughts. Release these doubts and concerns from your body and let the water take them away. After the bath, place the bouquet of roses someplace you'll pass by often. Stop and smell them and be reminded of your intent to release doubt and be more confident. Essential Oils: Get the grounding sorts of scents like ylang-ylang, bergamot, or frankincense to help solidify your energy and build inner strength. Herbs: A lovely cup of chamomile tea (hot or iced and sweetened with honey!) sipped while in the bath is a lovely way to release feelings of pain. It also aids the throat chakra so you can speak you mind better! Music: Tune your brain into empowering frequencies! Your body will resonate with the right energies. I'm a huge fan of Solfeggio Frequencies. They are a set of specific sound frequencies believed to have healing and positive effects on the mind and body. Rooted in ancient music traditions, particularly Gregorian chants, these frequencies are thought to align with natural patterns in the universe, promoting physical, emotional, and spiritual well-being This is my favorite video , but please look for a video that resonates the most with you. Here's a guide to lead you to what frequency you may need:  guide . 3. Deep Relaxation & Stress Relief Purpose : This bath is for relaxation down to your bones. You're tired, you're stressed, you need a minute. Take it! Affirmation : “I release all stress and tension. I am at peace, and my mind is clear and ready for creative inspiration.” Candles: Use blue or purple candles to promote calm and tranquility. Choose scented options like chamomile, sweet pea, or lavender for relaxation. Crystals: Surround the bath with moonstone (for emotional balance), rose quartz (for self love and moving forward from struggle), and amethyst (for deep relaxation and is repellant for low-vibration energies). Yes, more salt for the bath, too. Regular degular epsom salts are just fine, though consider some pink Himalayan salts with lavender flower buds and essential oil for an added punch. Flowers: A bundle of fresh or dried lavender set in a vase by the bath will fragrance the air. If peonies are in season, consider floating some flower heads and meditate on how they flow with the bath water. So too do you flow with the windings of the world. Oils: Consider adding lavender, neroli, or sage oils into the bath. They nix anxiety and help you reach new levels of zen. Herbs: Just like you would boil a big pot of bath tea for my first suggestion, toss in sage leaves and bring it to a boil. Steep, strain, and add to the tub for another excellent base. Music: Lo-Fi is high key the way to go with stress relief. When I'm trying to relax and not focus on anything, my body does this great thing where it doesn't relax. Lo-Fi music is calming, but gives your brain something to focus on without taking too much attention away from your bath ritual. Here are some of my favorite lo-fi sounds: Lo-fi for Ghosts (Only) 3 That 2 A.M. Fresh Air Chillhop Essentials 🍁 Fall 2020 Endless Sunday 😌 (Not technically lo-fi but it's low key) Meditation - Monoman Some are more chill. Some are more upbeat. Regardless, your bones will feel like jelly after this ritual. Once you’ve finished your ritual bath, don’t let that energy go to waste! Grab a notebook or open a blank document and start writing. Even if it’s just a stream of consciousness, let whatever thoughts, ideas, or images that came up during your bath flow onto the page. You might find that this relaxed state of mind helps you approach your writing with fresh perspectives and new inspiration. Also consider journaling about your experience. What came up for you during the ritual? Did you feel any shifts in your mindset? Reflecting on these experiences can help solidify the intention you set and keep the creative energy flowing long after the bath is over. Reiki or Energy Healing Another mindful practice from Japan: Reiki, a form of energy healing. Being a writer comes with pressure, deadlines, and emotional highs and lows, which can lead to burnout and self-doubt. Reiki promotes the balance of the body’s energy. This helps reduce anxiety and foster a calm, clear mind. By releasing emotional blockages, writers can overcome mental stagnation or creative blocks. Reiki can also enhance focus and clarity, making it easier to stay present and organized, whether drafting new material or revising an existing project. Beyond creativity, Reiki can support emotional healing, helping writers process difficult emotions or past traumas that might interfere with their work. It promotes self-empowerment and confidence, countering the self-doubt many writers face. By aligning energy and reinforcing positive beliefs, Reiki can help writers regain trust in their abilities, allowing them to push past obstacles with renewed confidence. Through self-reiki practices, working with a practitioner, or using reiki-infused objects, this holistic practice supports writers in maintaining mental and emotional balance, fostering a creative and productive writing flow. If a professional session isn’t feasible, I've enjoyed online guided sessions and (tried) self-Reiki by placing my hands on various energy centers (chakras) to clear mental and creative blockages. ASMR Reiki For Creative Blocks (Plucking, Hand Movements, Flashlight etc)  by Silver Hare ( Tyler Guillory) Divine Care Online 's video by the Late Shri. Sandip Jain My Spiritual Butterfly ( Gwen Allison) 's video Self-Reiki Guided Session for You  by Mainstream Reiki ( Andrea Kennedy) ASMR Role Play Reiki Healing & Hands Movements  by Dmitri at MassageASMR And there are so so SO many more to choose from. Just pick which ones feel best to you! Crystal Placement for Inspiration Crystals have been used for human intentions for centuries. Folks use them to harness specific energies and amplify manifestation. Using them to cultivate specific energies in the workspace is nothing new. In the context of writing, using crystals in your workspace is not only a beautiful way to set the ambiance but also a practice that can help you align with your creative flow. Placing certain crystals nearby can serve as gentle reminders to refocus your energy, shift your mindset, or break through creative blocks. These crystals become more than just décor—they help create your personal sanctuary of inspiration! "Okay but which shiny rocks do I use?" you ask. It's all about intention! Amethyst : Enhances creativity and clarity. This stone can help you stay open to ideas and imaginative insights. Citrine : Often associated with confidence and manifestation, it’s said to promote a positive outlook and self-belief. Lapis Lazuli : A stone for wisdom and truth, often believed to aid clarity in thought and communication, which is essential for writers. Sodalite : Referred to as the “poet’s stone,” it enhances self-expression, creativity, and clear communication, making it great for overcoming writer’s block. Clear Quartz : Known as the “master healer,” it amplifies energy and focus, helping you power through challenging writing sessions. Carnelian : A stone of motivation and courage. Stimulates creativity and passion, encouraging you to take bold steps in your storytelling. Fluorite : Supports mental clarity, organization, and concentration, making it perfect for structuring complex plots or editing. Blue Lace Agate : Calms the mind and encourages clear, thoughtful communication. This, in turn, helps you articulate your ideas with ease. Rose Quartz : Associated with self-compassion and emotional healing, it can help you write from the heart and explore deep, personal themes. Aquamarine : Known for its calming properties, this stone helps reduce anxiety and promotes clear thinking — which is ideal for stress-free writing sessions. Black Tourmaline : Provides protection from negative energy and distractions, helping you focus on your work with a clear mind. Smoky Quartz : Grounding and stabilizing, it helps clear mental fog, making it easier to focus on your writing projects. Tiger’s Eye : Enhances confidence, willpower, and determination, which can be useful when tackling daunting writing projects or deadlines. Green Aventurine : Known for promoting growth and abundance, it helps you feel optimistic and open to new creative possibilities. Moonstone : Often called the “stone of new beginnings,” it supports intuition and emotional balance, great for exploring character arcs and story development. Garnet : A stone of passion and commitment, it can help rekindle your enthusiasm for writing and overcome creative fatigue. Pyrite : Known as “fool’s gold,” it boosts confidence and persistence, encouraging you to stay on track with your writing goals. Bloodstone : Provides courage, clarity, and resilience, making it an excellent choice for writers facing creative challenges or self-doubt. Now that you got them, what do you do with them? Consider the below: On Your Desk : Place small tumbled stones or crystal points near your computer or notebook to infuse your workspace with their energy. During Brainstorming : Hold a crystal in your hand or keep it in your pocket during brainstorming sessions to channel its properties directly. For instance, hold Amethyst for intuitive insights or Citrine for a confidence boost. In Meditation : Use crystals as focus objects during meditation before you start writing. Sit quietly with your chosen stone, breathe deeply, and set your intentions for the writing session ahead. This can help center your mind and spark creativity. Grids & Charts : Get more involved by creating crystal grids tailored to your creative goals. For example, use Clear Quartz, Citrine, and Lapis Lazuli in a triangular pattern to balance focus, manifestation, and communication. Placing a chart under your grid can help amplify the energy and direct it toward your intentions. Amber White at   Crystal Alchemy  and  Sara Cardinale at  Bloom and Manifest  have great articles about grids that explain everything for you. Tarot or Oracle Card Journaling There are a thousand and three videos, blogs, books, courses, and teachings of how to use tarot and oracle cards for your personal life. Since being a writer seeps into every crevice of your personal life, the lines can blur. When I reach a conundrum regarding my writing, I find it useful to reach for one of my tarot decks to see if spirit has any insight. By incorporating the cards, you can tap into archetypes, themes, and motifs that might otherwise go unnoticed in your plotting and character development. Since tarot cards are rich with imagery and layered meanings, making them a valuable resource for writers seeking inspiration. For example: Character Development : Drawing a card like "The Hermit" might inspire you to explore a character’s period of introspection or isolation, where they seek deeper truths or uncover hidden knowledge. On the other hand, a card like "The Lovers" could prompt you to delve into themes of connection, choice, or duality in relationships. Conflict and Tension : If you draw a card such as "The Five of Wands," it could suggest conflict, competition, or internal struggles between characters. This could inspire scenes where tensions rise, either internally within a character or externally among a group. Plot Twists and Climax : Cards like "The Wheel of Fortune" or "Death" (symbolizing transformation rather than literal death) can prompt you to think about major turning points in your story, where fate intervenes or a character undergoes a significant transformation. These could serve as catalysts for a plot twist or the climax of your narrative. Thematic Exploration : Using cards from an oracle deck with specific themes, such as "Healing," "Courage," or "Trust," can guide you to infuse your story with deeper thematic layers. For example, drawing a "Healing" card might lead you to explore a subplot where a character reconciles with their past or makes amends for past mistakes. Character Arcs : After drawing a card, ask yourself,   "How might this card reflect my character’s inner struggle or growth? Could it hint at a hidden aspect of their past?" Plot Development : Consider,   "If this card represents a plot event, how can I weave it into the story to create a pivotal moment? Could it introduce a new challenge or opportunity?" Setting and Atmosphere : Reflect on   "What atmosphere or tone does this card evoke? How can I use this imagery to enhance the mood of a scene or the world-building in my story?" Symbolic Imagery : Think about,   "What symbols or colors on this card stand out to me? How can I incorporate similar imagery into my descriptions or metaphors?" At the very least, pulling cards gives insight to where you're at because your translation is a projection. Consider having fun with the cards and using a pull as a simple writing prompt to get the creative juices flowing. Above all, keep an open mind as to what the cards have to say. Writing with the Moon Cycles The moon cycles have long been linked to cycles of growth and reflection. Aligning your writing process with these phases can offer a sense of flow and purpose. New Moon : marks the beginning of the lunar cycle when the moon is not visible from Earth. It symbolizes  new beginnings, fresh starts, and setting intentions . Waxing Crescent : As the moon begins to wax or grow larger, a thin crescent shape becomes visible. This phase represents  intentionality, growth, and brainstorming actionable goals regarding your New Moon manifestations. First Quarter : Halfway between the New Moon and the Full Moon, the First Quarter phase is about  making decisions to overcome the first round of obstacles and taking decisive action . Waxing Gibbous : During the Waxing Gibbous phase, the moon is nearly full, representing a period of  growth, momentum, and expansion . Full Moon : The Full Moon is the climax of the lunar cycle when the moon appears fully illuminated in the night sky. It symbolizes  completion, fruition, and illumination . Waning Gibbous : After the Full Moon, the moon begins to wane or decrease in size. The Waning Gibbous phase represents  reflection, gratitude, and releasing what no longer serves you . Last Quarter : Halfway between the Full Moon and the New Moon, the Last Quarter phase signifies  introspection, revision, and reassessment . Waning Crescent : As the moon approaches the end of its cycle, it appears as a thin crescent in the sky. The Waning Crescent phase symbolizes  surrender, rest, and introspection . I have so much more information about this and how I implemented the ritual myself in my blog post titled, Setting Your Writing Intentions by the Moon Conclusion While not every technique may resonate, trying different approaches to self-care can help you discover what truly aligns with your creative energy and nourishes your spirit. The journey is all about tuning into your intuition and experimenting with practices that ground and inspire you . Because you and your brain matter. So care for them. If you think pulling a tarot card for guidance "is weird" but you get some great guidance, is it still weird? If you have cringy feelings about working with the moon and it's been your most productive season yet, shouldn't that remove some doubts about your own abilities? It's not weird to set intentions under the light of a full moon unless you make it weird. It's not weird to light insence because it helps you write better short stories unless you make it weird. If it works, it works! Self care is experimenting with the a sacred act of honoring your inner muse. Embrace your own magic and listen to the whispers of your intuition. As you explore these practices, you’ll weave a spell of protection around your creativity, allowing it to flourish in ways that feel authentic and powerful . Trust in the ebb and flow, and remember that your self-care rituals are as unique and mystical as your own writing journey. The "woo woo" can be for you, too, Katherine Arkady

  • From the Source: Baked In Details with Tasty Bakery

    Introduction How many Hallmark movies have you watched where bakeries were in some sort of peril?  I’m talking about the small-town bakeries battling corporate buyouts. I’m talking about the struggling artisan who saves the family bakery just  in time for Christmas. The big-city professional who trades power suits for pastries and finds love in the process. The underdog pastry chef who must win a high-stakes baking competition to keep the ovens running. The "bakery in peril" trope is practically its own genre. But how much of it reflects real life? And, if you’re writing about a bakery, how do you separate sweet fiction from the daily grind? You get it from the source! I reached out to area bakers and requested an email interview. Julie and Ran Rabinovitz of Tasty Bakery in Ann Arbor were very gracious to say yes and very generous to answer my questions. But first, what is Tasty Bakery? Tasty Bakery Owners Julie and Ran | photo by Tyra Overby According to their About Me page on their website, " Tasty Bakery is a dedicated gluten-free establishment in Ann Arbor, Michigan. Their mission is to offer products that can be enjoyed by everyone whether they are gluten intolerant or not. All of their products are gluten-free, soy-free, and corn-free. They also offer grain-free, dairy-free, vegan, and low-glycemic options. Their high-quality artisan baked goods are indiscernible from any traditional glutinous baked goods."  With this in mind and, after researching Tasty Bakery to get all of the googleable questions out of the way — let's remember the lesson from my Tattoo Artist Interview — I asked the following questions: Interview Questions:  1. Your gluten-free bakery started at a local farmer’s market before growing into a brick-and-mortar shop. If a writer were crafting a character with this journey, what key struggles or triumphs should they highlight?  First of all, it was really difficult finding a commercial kitchen. My circumstances were also different than most bakers, as I couldn’t really share a kitchen with someone unless they were not using gluten.  Another struggle was finding our brick-and-mortar location. We were looking into various locations that would have required building out a kitchen which would have been a huge expense. We were lucky to have a friend from the farmers’ market who knew we were looking. She was ready to stop using her commercial kitchen full time and had us pick up her lease. It’s the location we are in now.  I think the biggest obstacle though is finding employees. When I first started, people I met at the farmers’ market came to me asking for a job, or I found someone from a friend or acquaintance. Covid made that much more difficult; finding employees was very competitive. We want people who appreciate what we’re doing for our community and want to learn about it and be empathetic to our customers.  2. What are some key differences between baking at home and baking professionally in a bakery?  Space!!! I LOVE our kitchen. We have all the ingredients easily accessible in big bins, we have big pans, all the equipment and tools, and I don’t mind doing dishes because we have a three-compartment sink which is very efficient, way better than doing dishes at home.  3. Many fictional bakers have “secret recipes.” In real life, what goes into developing a truly unique gluten-free recipe, and how long does it take to perfect one? Are they ever truly "perfect"?  My goal when I started 16 years ago was to provide products that were indiscernible from anything with gluten. That wasn’t so difficult because I found a gluten-free flour that I really liked. Adding tasty vegan to the gluten-free repertoire has been trickier. We try to use only “clean” ingredients which also changes things. I often rely on researching those who have already done the work. I just tweak the recipes to make them exactly how I want them.  I really try to only introduce products that get a good response from testing, otherwise it won’t be in our inventory.  4. What are the physical and mental demands of baking that writers should be aware of when creating a baker character?  Our bakery is a bit different in that we are very laid back, and we have fun. I’ve heard of people who have had things thrown at them from the chef when they were mad. That is not us. We know how valuable our employees are, and we know everyone makes mistakes, including us. Other than the winter months, we are consistently busy. We pretty much work from the minute we get in the door, to cleaning up at the end of the day. It is pretty exhausting, especially for me since I will soon be 60.  5. In fiction, bakers often work solo, but in reality, how much of baking is a team effort? What roles do different people play in a professional kitchen?  Our staff performs all the roles that I do at the bakery: opening the store, baking, waiting on customers, wrapping & labeling product and getting it ready for the store or to go to our wholesale accounts, stocking, washing dishes, and cleaning up. (They are better at some of those things than I am!) I have one day a week that I get to work by myself, (and maybe with my husband). That is the day I try and experiment with a new recipe if I have time.    6. Are there any unusual baking terms, traditions, or superstitions that writers might find interesting?  I cannot think of anything, except one that I just learned: for instance, someone saying “we are out of eggs” and the person needs to say back “heard” so it’s understood. However, that’s probably pretty basic. lol  7. With your start at the farmer's market, your crowdfunding success, and nearly ten (woohoo!) years of operating the bakery, what does it mean to you to be embraced by your community? Do you feel you’re able to return that embrace?  Our bakery business isn’t super profitable. However, the love that I/we get from people who appreciate what we do is priceless. I feel honored that we can provide treats, or cakes + catering for events, for those who cannot just go anywhere and get a treat due to their food allergies, or beliefs (vegan).  8. What resources do you use that writers could utilize for their research? (For example: websites, textbooks, industry journals, professional organizations, or official guidelines.)  Here are some of my favorite cookbooks and websites in the order that I started:  Original recipes that I already had and converted to gluten free The BabyCakes  cookbooks by Erin McKenna  Flying Apron's Gluten-Free & Vegan Baking Book  by Jennifer Katzinger Minimalist Baker, an online community at www.minimalistbaker.com   The Unconventional Baker, operated by baker, blogger, and author Audrey Snowe at www.unconventionalbaker.com Smitten Kitchen operated by Deb Perelman at www.smittenkitchen.com  (converted to Gluten-Free) The Loopy Whisk run by recipe developer, writer, and science nerd, Katarina Cermelj at www.theloopywhisk.com The Bakery Visit I have a massive sweet tooth and have a second stomach for desserts, so the idea of visiting Tasty Bakery was in the forefront of my mind when conducting this interview. Now, I’m not gluten-free myself, but, in my experience, the work of bakers that are gluten-free ABSOLUTELY shows in their creations. Tasty Bakery has 76 five-star reviews on Google that would agree. But can I rely on secondary sources for my research? Not when there are sweets and savories involved! I had to get the primary sources myself, you see. I asked Julie, “Any personal favorites or bestsellers you’d recommend for a first-time visitor?” She responded: “ Our berry bars are our best sellers. However, I’m more of a chocolate chip cookie or brownie person myself. ;))” With that directive in mind, I drove myself and my boyfriend to Ann Arbor to visit Tasty Bakery at 416 W Huron St #24, Ann Arbor, MI 48103 . They're tucked into a cute nook that I imagine would be even cuter once the flora comes alive. But once inside...! I've been to bakeries before, but this bakery held an intangible feeling to it. Everything about it was handled with care and love. You walk in and feel cozy with the handmade décor. There's a corner for kiddos to color and you bet they hang the creations on the wall. Artwork was either in thanks of making such tasty sweets or in promotion of the "Anti-Gluten Club." We were warmly greeted by Ran, co-owner and husband to Julie. He first asked if we had any allergies (damn Cinnamon) , and gladly explained their process of creation. I paid attention to the best of my abilities but, dear readers, when there is a case full of sweets and savories, my mind is prone to wander. The long and the short of it is that they carefully source their materials from reputable places like Golden Prairie Oats and Mindo Chocolate that guarantee no cross contamination. Their entire kitchen is carefully prepared for baking the goods so that any treat can be the treat for you. I think I blacked out while ordering because we left with a bag of three Berry Bars, an Intense Fudge Brownie, a Lemon Cloud cookie, and a bag of Sea Salt Rosemary Crackers. Here's the descriptive breakdown: Intense Fudge Brownie: Boyfriend and I ate it in silence. It was that good. Best brownie I’ve had in recent years, gluten-free or not. It had the “Girl Scout Cookie Thin Mint Effect” where you could keep eating it and not get sick of the decadence. The way the flavor developed as you were chewing it had me regretting only getting one. I pulled off the chocolate "shell" on the top and didn't let the boyfriend have any. Sorry not sorry. Lemon Cloud Cookie: A burst of lemon in the best way. This cookie was a bright taste of spring. And the way it was both crispy and chewy? It was an artful bite. The glaze was the cherry on top. I'd gladly eat just that off of a spoon. Berry Bars: Are best sellers for a reason! The boyfriend dubbed them with a tagline of "berry good!" It was the right amount of sweet but not too sweet. The first bite was great but the second was better and the third was better than that and the fourth, well, if you didn't eat the bars in only four bites, you've got far more self-discipline than me. Do yourself a favor and get the bag of three. It 's the perfect breakfast bar, the perfect snack bar, the perfect dessert bar, the perfect midnight snack bar... Sea Salt Rosemary Crackers: A third of the crackers were gone before I finished reading the luscious list of ingredients. They had the right crisp to them but still kept their substance. The (Michigan sourced!) rosemary was full of flavor but didn't overpower. It was a bite of summer. My only regret with these is not getting three bags. While you have to have baked goods to be a bakery, not all bakeries have that intangible something that make it a community pillar like Tasty Bakery. My interaction with Ran wasn't that of a big box store that just wants you to get your stuff and get out. Ran was full of conversation for us. He asked what we like, made more recommendations (that you bet we took!), and took it a step further to suggest local places for my boyfriend and I to visit while we were in town. These are people that care. They care about their creations. They care about who is eating the creations. They care about the bigger picture of inclusion and the communion of eating sweets that are mindfully made. These details are the things worth writing about. And you need to go to the source to get them. Find Out More About Tasty Bakery Website: https://www.tastysansgluten.com Instagram: @ tastybakerya2 Facebook: facebook.com/TastyBakeryA2 Stop in! If you're in the area, treat yourself with a visit to this cozy spot. Even if you're not in the area, make a trip out like I did! You won't regret it. It's the spot for folk with dietary restrictions and it's the spot for folk that want to be mindful about what they're eating. Conclusion Be mindful with the details of research like Julie and Ran are mindful with their baked goods. They carefully source their materials for baking like writers could carefully source their information for stories. They test recipes and get feedback like writers should experiment with drafts and get critiques. They look into other cooking resources like writers should look into other writing sources (like this one!). They think about every detail from conception to the last bite like writers should think about every detail from conception to the last page. And it makes all the difference in the experience. The details is where it gets sweet, Katherine Arkady

  • In Reference To... "Cruel Intentions" and Their High Brow Allusions

    Introduction Coming from the age of watching Gossip Girl , 90210 , and The O.C. while in my formative years, I love a good tale where rich people have too much time on their hands and not enough morals to mind their business. So when Cruel Intentions was announced, I was all about it. The premise of Cruel Intentions has been rebooted, reimagined, and retooled plenty of times. This series has been in the works for a very long time. According to the 2024 series' Wikipedia page : "The series, set in a Washington, D.C., college among rich students, follows two manipulative step siblings who are ready to do anything to maintain their status. It features a cast led by Sarah Catherine Hook , Zac Burgess , and Savannah Lee Smith . Plan for a television adaptation of the film started in 1999 at Fox with a prequel series that was later retooled as the 2000 direct-to-video film Cruel Intentions 2 following its cancelation due to creative concerns. In 2015, NBC picked up a television pilot for a continuation of the film's storyline with Sarah Michelle Gellar returning but later passed on the project. Amazon announced a new project's development for Amazon Freevee in 2021, with Neal H. Moritz returning as an executive producer. It was given a series order in April 2023, and moved to Prime Video several months later. Filming took place in Toronto and began in June 2023. Cruel Intentions premiered on Amazon Prime Video on November 21, 2024, to generally mixed reviews. In March 2025, the series was canceled after one seaso n." If you want to know how this series is similar to the other versions, this is not the post for you. However , if you want to know what made the writing of the series particularly interesting, please, read on. Because the thing is, I didn't realize it was so allusion-heavy until Episode 5, so it warranted a second watch to really gather the references together. And there are a lot! Why so many? What's the point? Did it even add to the story? Short answers : Class consciousness. Class consciousness. Yes. But first, let's give a little background on the story. Quick Links to Sections: The Series as a Whole Allusions vs References The Allusions in Question Episode 1 - Alpha Episode 2 - Beta Episode 3 - Gamma Episode 4 - Delta Episode 5 - Epsilon Episode 6 - Zeta Episode 7 - Eta Episode 8 - Theta Class Consciousness Conclusion The Series as a Whole This series is based off of the 1999 cult classic of the same name starring Reese Witherspoon , Sarah Michelle Gellar , Ryan Philippe , and Selma Blair . That 1999 film is set in New York City among rich high schoolers. According to the IMDb page : " Kathryn Merteuil and Sebastian Valmont are seductive, manipulative step-siblings who get what they want when they want it. Kathryn makes a bet with Sebastian: Sebastian must bed Annette, daughter of the headmaster at their school, before the end of summer break. Annette has stated that she would wait until love and marriage to sleep with a man. If Kathryn wins, she gets Sebastian's vintage 1956 Jaguar Roadster. If Sebastian wins, he gets Kathryn, the only girl he knows he'll never have. Also in play is Cecile, a naïve girl whose mother had enlisted Kathryn to help her fit in at her new school. However, Kathryn (with Sebastian's help) plans to ruin Cecile's reputation as revenge on Kat's ex-boyfriend, who left her for Cecile." We gotta take it a step further because the 2024 Cruel Intentions is based off of the 1999 Cruel Intentions and that's based off of Pierre Choderlos de Laclos ' 1782 novel Les Liaisons dangereuses . You see how the references and retellings go deep. There's also really good 1988 film with Glenn Close and John Malkovich called Dangerous Liasons . That's set in prerevolution Paris (with some stellar costuming!) and is the closest retelling to the 1782 rendition. That's my favorite and I highly recommend watching that above all. Glenn Close and Michelle Pfeiffer are * chef's kiss * Allusions vs References Readers, I felt like Steve Rogers/Captain America in The Avengers while watching this. You know the scene: Nick Fury : I don't know about that, but it is powered by the cube. And I'd like to know how Loki used it to turn two of the sharpest men I know into his personal flying monkeys. Thor : Monkeys? I do not understand. Steve Rogers : I do! I mean, at the very least I knew there were references being made. Or...allusions? What's the difference? What is an Allusion? An allusion  is a subtle or indirect  nod to something outside the text—like a wink to literature, pop culture, mythology, history, etc. It's not spelled out; you have to get the vibe  or know the source to fully appreciate the meaning. Purpose:  Allusions add depth, irony, or commentary. They reward viewers/readers who are "in the know." Key traits:  Indirect, clever, layered, sometimes blink-and-you-miss-it. Example:  If a character says, “Call me Icarus,” right after doing something reckless, that’s an allusion to the Greek myth—implying pride, downfall, etc.—without explaining it outright. What is a Reference? A reference , on the other hand, is more explicit . It name-drops or clearly points to something. It can be playful or on-the-nose. Purpose?  Often used for humor, style, or to anchor the story in a particular cultural context. Key traits?  Direct, obvious, recognizable. Example:  If a character says, “This is giving Gossip Girl ,” they’re referencing that show directly—you don’t need context clues or literary analysis. TL;DR: Allusion = subtle, requires interpretation Reference = direct, calls it by name But here's the twist: in pop culture (especially a show like Cruel Intentions  that leans into both highbrow and lowbrow), the line between allusion and reference is super  blurry. Something might start as a reference, but act like an allusion based on how it’s used. The Allusions in Question Here are the references that I was able to catch while watching 2024's Cruel Intentions . Each drop down includes the script lines surrounding the reference/allusion and an explanation. Episode 1 - Alpha 6:30 - Evolutionary Necessities / “Missing Link” / “How Darwinian” LUCIEN   How drunk are you? BLAISE Well, I want you to do terrible things to me till I beg you to continue. LUCIEN So, very or not at all? BLAISE [chuckles] Say what you will, but, uh, at this point in the night, I'd argue it's an evolutionary necessity. LUCIEN   How Darwinian. [CeCe approaches them] BLAISE   There's our little missing link now. Allusion Type:  Intellectual/Scientific Allusion Source:  Charles Darwin & Evolutionary Theory Explanation:  Blaise and Lucien’s banter about "evolutionary necessities" and calling CeCe the “missing link” is a mocking, pseudo-intellectual burn , alluding to Darwin’s theory of evolution . The “missing link” is often referenced in discussions of human ancestry—a dig at CeCe's supposed lack of sophistication. Why It Matters:  Sets the tone for their elitist, sardonic worldview and uses “highbrow” language to insult in a “lowbrow” way. 7:40 - "If my grandma had wheels, would she be a bike?” CECE   What’s this? What’s Rourke doing here with her? They watch Rourke whisper something to Gemma. She giggles. As CeCe takes off through the party, Blaise following. BLAISE   Gemma Davenport. Say. Isn’t she running against your girl—? CECE   He wasn’t supposed to be in town tonight, let alone here, at our victory lap, squiring around the competition like a goddamn billboard for the opposition! BLAISE   Oh, we are in a little bit of a twist about this, aren’t we? CECE Did you know about this? BLAISE If my grandmother had wheels would she be a bike?   CECE What? I don’t care about your grandmother. What am I supposed to tell Caroline? Reference Type:  Slangy/Cultural Reference Origin:  This is a popular idiomatic expression, often used to dismiss hypothetical or circular arguments. Common in Eastern European memes and speech, notably in some viral clips . Explanation:  Blaise is being dismissive or sarcastic—saying “what ifs” are pointless. Why It Matters:  Injects absurd humor into a highbrow setting, contrasting with their earlier Darwin reference. Shows Blaise's flair for the dramatic and ridiculous. 9:04 - “Horse’s head in his bed” CAROLINE   I need to speak to Rourke. Now. Caroline walks off, single minded in her pursuit of Rourke. CeCe and Lucien trail her, talking over each other. CECE What do you think this means? Realistically? I mean, pulling something like this so close to the election? LUCIEN Good ol’ Rourke. What do we think, horse head in his bed? As they make their way through the party, the sound of the far off [SMASHES] gets more noticeable. CECE (CONT’D) Okay, hypothetically... is he cheating on you? Did you break up...? LUCIEN (CONT’D) Or a spider. A bunch of spiders. That seems infinitely worse to me than a horse’s head. CECE (CONT’D)   Or are you still together but it’s just that Alpha Gamma’s backing Gemma Davenport instead of you now? LUCIEN (CONT’D) Seems like he’d be afraid of spiders. The macho guys usually are. Could do snakes though. Very phallic. CECE (CONT’D)  If they’ve jumped the fence, we could have real trouble... LUCIEN (CONT’D) Right here in River City? CeCe finally registers Lucien talking — CECE (CONT’D) (to Lucien) Can you shut up? Allusion Type:  Cinematic Allusion Source:   The Godfather  (1972) Explanation:  Lucien is referencing the infamous Godfather  scene where a severed horse’s head is placed in a man's bed as a warning. He’s jokingly suggesting they should intimidate Rourke with similarly dramatic mob-style tactics. Why It Matters:  Adds theatrical menace and frames Lucien’s schemes as operatic or overly cinematic—very Cruel Intentions  vibe. 37:45 - “One-man rendition of Stomp ” Rourke is in a rage, barreling through the party ROURKE   Everybody get the fuck out! If you don’t live here, I don’t wanna see you! BLAISE   Okay! Way to show your dominance... Blaise leads him into the kitchen. Rourke smashes around, looking for a glass. Giving up, he just takes a swig—   BLAISE (CONT’D) Why the one-man rendition of Stomp ? Reference Type:  Pop Culture / Performing Arts Source:   Stomp , the percussion performance group  known for using everyday objects as instruments (banging trash cans, etc.) Explanation:  Blaise is mocking Rourke's angry outburst, comparing it to Stomp —implying he’s loud, messy, and dramatic. Why It Matters:  Satirical. Uses artsy performance reference to poke fun at emotional immaturity. 42:10 - “Swan Lake” / “Von Rothbart” As Caroline’s door swings open to reveal Lucien, lounging against the door frame, looking a little worse for wear. LUCIEN   I believe congratulations are in order. CAROLINE   What ever are you talking about? LUCIEN   You can drop the act, we’re all happy to have danced your little Swan Lake.   CAROLINE   And I’m free of Von Rothbart  forever. Allusion Type:  Classical Ballet Allusion Source:   Swan Lake  by Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky Explanation: This isn’t just about ballet—it’s a coded takedown of Rourke . In Swan Lake , Von Rothbart is the manipulative sorcerer who curses Odette and controls her fate. Here, Rourke is being cast as the Rothbart figure— controlling, deceptive, maybe even predatory —and Caroline is positioning herself as Odette, finally breaking free of his spell. Why It Matters: The allusion flips the power dynamic—Caroline is no longer the pawn in Rourke’s grand performance. It’s also a very Cruel Intentions  move to reframe interpersonal drama through the lens of high art. 43:30 - “Oh captain, my captain” Lucien leans over Caroline's shoulder and sees the name and picture of the author—BEATRICE WORTH. Caroline looks at Lucien, an eyebrow raised.   LUCIEN No such thing as bad publicity? CAROLINE Just bad news. (to Lucien) You’ll need to finish the job. Lucien salutes her with a grin. LUCIEN   O Captain, my Captain. Allusion Type:  Literary Allusion Source:   Walt Whitman’s poem   “O Captain! My Captain!” , famously re-used in Dead Poets Society Explanation:  Lucien sarcastically references the poetic tribute to a fallen leader—either mocking Caroline's command or her martyrdom in their scheme. Why It Matters:  Layered meaning—depending on tone, it could read as sincere, mocking, or both. Also ties to themes of rebellion and authority. Episode 2  - Beta 12:03 - “Unless the twin I absorbed in utero miraculously reappears” RY I'm not a fan of your dad's politics. ANNIE Okay. BEATRICE Ry. RY I was about to say that, even though I'm not crazy about your dad's political positions, I respect that you're your own person who has your own views. ANNIE I am. Unless the twin I absorbed in utero miraculously reappears. RY What? ANNIE Nothing. Oh, I think it was an episode of House or something. [She laughs and clears her throat]  I-I do have my own views. I'm just trying to put them all together right now. RY Well, I look forward to hearing them. Reference Type:  Medical Drama / Dark Humor Direct Reference:   House M.D. , Season 3, Episode 2 – “Cane & Able” Explanation:  Annie jokes about having conflicting opinions—unless her absorbed twin returns to weigh in. This is a morbidly funny  reference to a medical plotline in House  where a “vanishing twin” (absorbed in utero) may be influencing a boy’s hallucinations. Why It Matters: This is high-key House humor: dry, smart, and a bit twisted. It also shows Annie’s self-awareness, and maybe her love of niche medical trivia. The joke is also a layered way of expressing internal conflict— Cruel Intentions -style—wrapped in a flippant delivery. 33:00 - “Phalaris used to burn his critics to death inside a hollowed-out bronze bull?” CAROLINE You're suddenly all out of pretty words about Lucien and my choices. BLAISE As of now. CAROLINE Did you know that Phalaris used to burn his critics to death inside a hollowed out bronze bull? BLAISE If I recall, Phalaris was burned alive inside the bull too.   CAROLINE Idiot. Allusion Type:  Historical Allusion with Symbolic Undertones Direct Reference:   Phalaris , a tyrant from ancient Sicily, and the Brazen Bull —a torture/execution device allegedly used by him to roast people alive. Explanation:  Caroline brings up the brutal image of Phalaris burning his enemies alive inside a bronze bull—a moment dripping with menace, metaphor, and a slight Greek tragedy flair. Blaise, in classic buzzkill fashion, jumps in with: “If I recall, Phalaris was burned alive inside the bull too.” He’s technically  correct (legend says he was overthrown and executed the same way he killed others), but this is not a TED Talk—it’s a power play. Why It Matters: Caroline invokes historical cruelty to make a point—likely drawing a parallel to the unchecked ego or tyranny of someone nearby ( cough, cough Rourke). It’s a clever burn masked as a history lesson. Blaise, instead of vibing with the metaphor, turns it into a smug trivia contest. Caroline’s muttered “idiot” is less about factual inaccuracy  and more about emotional illiteracy . He missed the point, killed the mood, and proved himself an intellectual lightweight wearing a heavy vocabulary. 34:00 - “Until the fucking curtain comes down” CAROLINE Delta Phi has always promoted a culture of community, of support. And we will continue to empower the women of Manchester College. PROTESTERS It is classist! It's exclusionary! And it's violent! Racist! CAROLINE We will continue to fight to defy expectations. To stand stronger, to unite this house against the forces, the people, that try to divide us, to undermine us, and all the good we have achieved in the name of Delta Phi. PROTESTERS   [Chanting] Hey, hey! ho, ho! Greek life has go to go! Hey, hey! ho, ho! Greek life has go to go! Hey, hey! ho, ho! Greek life has go to go! Hey, hey! ho, ho! [Chanting continues] CAROLINE You may think you have power. You may think you can take us down. But just know... we will be here. I will be here until the fucking curtain comes down. Allusion Type:  Philosophical / Literary Possible Source:   Desiderius Erasmus or general theater metaphor “What is life but a play in which everyone acts a part until the curtain comes down?” — commonly attributed to Erasmus (though similar sentiments appear in Shakespeare and later thinkers) Explanation:  Caroline declares to the protesters that she’s staying “until the fucking curtain comes down”— a dramatic vow of endurance . It’s got serious “last-act energy,” echoing that old philosophical idea that life is performance and death is the final curtain. Why It Matters:  Caroline’s always been theatrical, but this line injects gravity—she’s casting herself as someone committed to the role, to the bit, to the cause… until the literal end. Bonus Layer: By swearing in the line, it also modernizes the quote—think Erasmus by way of Succession . It's a reappropriated classical reference with bite. Episode 3 - Gamma 6:26 - “The girl who lived, come to die.” BLAISE If it isn't Caroline Merteuil. The girl who lived, come to die.   CAROLINE Well, that's awfully tired. Allusion Type:  Pop Culture Reference / Literary Echo Direct Reference:   Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: Part Two (2011) Voldemort: “Harry Potter. The boy who lived... come to die.” Explanation:  Blaise greets Caroline with a heavy-handed Voldemort line, casting himself as the dark wizard and Caroline as the resurrected target. Caroline, unimpressed, dryly responds: “Well, that’s awfully tired.” Why It Matters:  Blaise’s choice of words is dramatic, theatrical, and… yeah, kind of tired. Caroline calls it out, instantly flipping the power dynamic back in her favor. It shows how this world thrives on references—but also how sharp you have to be to wield them well . Blaise quotes Voldemort; Caroline critiques the script. Furthermore, it's worth noting that Voldemort says this quote in the movie . Not even the book. So Blaise isn't even getting down to the source material. 18:30 - “She’s a look-alike... You ever seen the movie Dave ?” LUCIEN The lady will be paying. ANNIE [Clicks tongue] Well, then, I guess it's on me. CASHIER ID? ANNIE Yeah. CASHIER Cassidy Featherstone? ANNIE Sir, I'm... CASHIER The vice president's daughter? LUCIEN [Applauding] Damn, Cassidy, you really are the best that they've got. She's a look-alike. CASHIER She's a what now? LUCIEN A look-alike. They have them for, like, those, uh, higher-level people. It's a thing. You ever seen the movie Dave?   CASHIER Yeah, with, uh, Kevin Kline. LUCIEN Right. Based off a true story. CASHIER Okay. I guess I never really realized. LUCIEN Do you think that the vice president's daughter would be hanging around in... [phone buzzing] ...forgive me if I'm offending you, but do you really think she'd be hanging around a place like this? CASHIER So, you're being for real right now? ANNIE Completely real. Yeah, I've been with the second family for, ugh, God, it feels like lifetimes at this point. CASHIER Well, you look almost identical. ANNIE I mean, I better after what I went through. Allusion Type:  Film Reference / Political Satire Direct Reference:   Dave  a 1993 film starring Kevin Kline  and Sigourney Weaver Explanation:  Lucien defuses a suspicious cashier by claiming Annie isn’t really Cassidy Featherstone (the vice president’s daughter), but a look-alike , just like in Dave . In the film, an ordinary guy impersonates the U.S. President, leading to heartfelt political chaos. Lucien sells it by calling it a “true story,” lol. Why It Matters:  Lucien’s reference works on two levels : He’s bullshitting the cashier with a niche political comedy from 30 years ago. Elite mischief. He’s referencing a movie about impersonation  to cover up a real case of impersonation—hella meta and sneakily brilliant. Huge bonus written in that this cashier has seen Dave . 33:30 - “Easy, Joe Friday.” CECE Miss? Excuse me. Can I offer you a serving utensil? Or a napkin? When you use your hand... BLAISE Leave them be, CeCe. CECE But there are a lot of very accessible valuables in this room we need to keep an eye on. BLAISE Easy, Joe Friday . Caroline knows what she's doing, so just for tonight, try being a normal human being. CECE I really dislike you sometimes. BLAISE Right back at you. Allusion Type:  TV Reference / Character-Based Sarcasm Direct Reference:   Dragnet ’s Sgt. Joe Friday Explanation:  CeCe is trying to keep the party under control, worrying about etiquette and valuables. Blaise cuts in with, “Easy, Joe Friday”—referencing the ultra-serious detective from the old-school police procedural Dragnet , known for his catchphrase: “Just the facts, ma’am.” Why It Matters: Blaise is mocking CeCe for being too by-the-book, like a party cop. It’s classic Blaise: using a vintage cultural reference to throw someone off their high horse. Also? He low-key gives her credit—because Joe Friday always got the job done . The insult is smart, subtle, and salty—like most of Blaise’s best jabs. Episode 4 - Delta 8:08 - “They screened Breathless  in my French New Wave cinema class.” Annie knocks on the door of Beatrice's dorm room. Beatrice opens it and sighs. BEATRICE Oh. I thought you were my food. What do you want? ANNIE Nothing. Um, I like your bangs. BEATRICE They screened Breathless in my French New Wave cinema class, so... ANNIE And they look really good. They look really French. BEATRICE What do you really want? ANNIE Nothing. Seriously, I just...I-I wanted to see how you were. Allusion Type:  Film Reference / Style Signal Direct Reference:   Breathless  (or À bout de souffle , 1960) , directed by Jean-Luc Godard . Explanation:  Beatrice attributes her new bangs to a screening of Breathless —the cornerstone of French New Wave cinema and of women cutting blunt bangs after watching too much existential drama. Jean Seberg’s iconic pixie-banged look in the film became shorthand for insouciant chic . Why It Matters: This isn’t just a beauty comment—it’s a vibe flex. Beatrice is announcing she’s film-literate , disaffected, and aesthetically dangerous. Annie compliments the bangs sincerely (“they look really French”), but Beatrice can smell an ulterior motive a mile away. French New Wave = stylish alienation = perfect for Cruel Intentions Gen Z edition. 36: 22 - "The heart wants what the heart wants." BLAISE Guess the heart wants what the heart wants. LUCIEN Ain't that f*cking right. Allusion Type:  Common Phrase / Misattributed Quotation Direct Reference:   The title is from a letter by Emily Dickinson . The saying was popularized in 1992 when it was quoted by Woody Allen in an interview about his relationship with Soon-Yi Previn . Explanation:  Blaise drops the line like it’s deep, and Lucien responds with a grim, “Ain’t that f*cking right.” It sounds poetic, tragic, and timeless—but the origin? Messier than people realize. Woody Allen used this phrase in an infamous interview when defending his deeply controversial relationship with Soon-Yi Previn. Sooo...not exactly Dickinson. Why It Matters: This is a perfect example of false literary elevation —saying something you think is profound without knowing its baggage. In a show obsessed with appearances and intellectual flexing, this line reveals how easily sentimentality masks darker truths. Whether Blaise knows the origin or not, it lands with weight—just maybe not the kind they intended. If Caroline had been there, she definitely  would’ve called them both idiots. Episode 5 - Epsilon 11:00 - "[His] girl Friday" BLAISE He already offered me the job. LUCIEN Oh, offered you the job as in, "negotiate your salary" kind of way, or a little pat on the back and, "Any friend of my son has a place in my administration," kind of way? BLAISE Stay out of it. LUCIEN I just want to make sure that your Scott's girl Friday is over by Monday . BLAISE Or what, Lucien? LUCIEN I guess we'll see, won't we? Allusion Type:  Film & Literary Reference Direct Reference:   His Girl Friday  (1940) , starring Cary Grant & Rosalind Russell Explanation:   His Girl Friday  is a classic screwball comedy about a sharp-witted female reporter caught between her ex-husband (also her boss) and her professional ambitions. The title itself turned “Girl Friday” into shorthand for a resourceful, overqualified assistant/sidekick —a term that originally comes from Robinson Crusoe   (where “ Man Friday ” was Crusoe’s loyal servant). Lucien uses it to suggest that Blaise is just a useful political pawn in Scott’s world—someone doing the legwork rather than holding real power. And yeah, technically Annie would be the Girl Friday for Scott, but Lucien’s goal isn’t to make a perfect analogy—it’s to undermine Blaise . He hijacks the term for his own agenda, which honestly, is the Cruel Intentions  way. Why It Matters: Lucien’s snarky remark is two insults in one: He’s undermining Blaise’s power —implying that this “job” is more about nepotism than competence. He’s predicting Blaise’s downfall —with “over by Monday” , he suggests this arrangement won’t last. Given that His Girl Friday  is about outmaneuvering manipulative men, the irony is chef’s kiss . 23:25 - Bal á Versailles LUCIEN Sorry I'm late. ( Claudia kisses ) CLAUDIA Good to see you. LUCIEN Well, uh, someone smells nice. What is that? CAROLINE Bal á Versailles and barely concealed rage. LUCIEN Well, I'm glad I missed it. CAROLINE Let's get you a drink, so the fun can begin. CLAUDIA Oh, here. Share mine. Allusion Type:  Luxury Cultural Reference / Mood Descriptor Direct Reference:   Bal à Versailles  – A French perfume by Jean Desprez , launched in 1962. Explanation:  When Lucien off-handedly asks, “What is that scent?” , Caroline doesn’t just answer—she curates a whole mood: “Bal à Versailles” A perfume associated with old money, excess, and French aristocracy  (a.k.a. exactly what she embodies). “…and barely concealed rage.”   A reminder that beneath the glamour, she is seething. Essentially, Caroline frames her emotions like a luxury brand—elegant, refined, but still dangerous. This is not just a perfume; it’s a controlled weapon . Why It Matters:   Bal à Versailles itself is a statement.  This is the perfume of Marie Antoinette vibes: decadence, powdered wigs, and  impending disaster. Bal à Versailles literally invokes the Palace of Versailles —the opulent playground of France’s doomed elite. In the original novel, the aristocrats were so out of touch  that revolution became inevitable. Caroline, in referencing this scent, is aligning herself (knowingly or not) with that same aesthetic of doomed privilege. Caroline’s anger isn’t out of control—it’s bottled, aged, and applied with precision. She is both self-aware and performative.  Even in her fury, she makes sure it’s delivered in the most expensive way possible. This isn’t just a throwaway line—it’s characterization in a bottle . Plus, I love the callback to the source material. 👏👏👏 Episode 6 - Zeta 11:20 - “The Theme is Paradise Lost ” CAROLINE What is all this? CECE You said to get refreshments. CAROLINE I didn't mean that kind of coke. The theme is "Paradise Lost." When you think "Paradise Lost," do you think "soda"? CECE Well, when I think "Paradise Lost," I don't really think "party" either. The themes aren't really what I'd call celebratory. I was discussing it with Professor Chadwick, and he says it's really a story about the ultimate punishment for disobedience. Allusion Type:  Literary Classic – Paradise Lost by John Milton (1667) Reference Level:  Direct + Thematic Commentary Explanation: Caroline is throwing a 21st birthday party for Lucien and—because this show can’t just do “Under the Sea” like the normies—the theme is Paradise Lost, John Milton’s epic poem chronicling Satan’s fall from Heaven, the corruption of mankind, and the banishment from Eden. CeCe, ever the voice of bizarre logic and inadvertent genius, points out the obvious: “The themes aren’t really what I’d call celebratory.” And she’s right! Paradise Lost is a tale of: Disobedience Exile Pride And literally losing paradise Hardly what you’d expect at a party with a bar and a cake. This party isn't about celebrating innocence—it’s about leaning into corruption. Caroline and Lucien are, in a way, casting themselves as fallen angels who chose the fall. It's giving, " Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven." Why It Matters: It’s a perfect satire of how elite kids turn high art into party aesthetics. Paradise Lost becomes a metaphor for Lucien’s arc: charming, dangerous, and self-exiled. CeCe unintentionally nails the core conflict of the show: everyone here is getting punished for disobedience—whether they know it or not. 21:20 - “Persepolis but with Less Fire” BEATRICE This is a pretty great party. It's like Persepolis but with less fire. BLAISE Don't talk to me. BEATRICE That's rude. Allusion Type:  Literary & Historical Reference Level: Direct & Thematic Explanation: Persepolis was the capital of the Achaemenid Empire  (550-330 BCE), located in what is now Iran. Founded by Darius I (or Darius the Great)  and later expanded by his successors, it was a symbol of Persian power  and wealth. The city was famous for its grandeur , featuring monumental architecture, incredible art, and grand palaces. It was a symbol of the Persian empire’s might and its ability to unify a vast and diverse collection of peoples under its rule. Persepolis was sacked and burned  over the course of five months by Alexander the Great  in 330 BCE, a dramatic event often symbolic of the fall of empires . This destruction is often referenced as the end of an era of Persian glory . Why It Matters: This comparison draws an ironic parallel between the grandeur of the party and the fate of Persepolis, which was destroyed by fire after becoming a symbol of opulence. It ties directly into the central themes of the show: decadence, moral collapse, and self-destruction. The party may seem extravagant now, but we know that things are bound to combust in typical Cruel Intentions  fashion. Episode 7 - Eta 1:30 - "In the court of public opinion" ELLA Honestly? It's like they're playing checkers, and you're playing chess. BEATRICE You know, for the first time in a long time, I feel good. I feel like I really accomplished something. I did what needed to be done. ELLA Maybe you should call that reporter. BEATRICE No. I'm out of the limelight. Let the entire institution of Greek life hang itself in the court of public opinion. They can humiliate themselves for a change. Allusion Type:  Legal and Social Commentary Reference Level: Direct (legal and social context) Explanation: Court of public opinion refers to society’s informal judgment of people, institutions, or actions. Unlike a formal courtroom, this “court” is where people are judged by public sentiment, media, and gossip. It's a reference to the judgment of society rather than a formal judicial decision . Beatrice’s comment about letting Greek life hang itself “in the court of public opinion” suggests that she’s stepping back from the drama, allowing the fraternities and sororities to face the consequences of their actions without her interference. Greek life’s actions will be scrutinized by the wider world—and the consequences may not be as formal or legal, but they’ll be just as significant. Why It Matters: This line underscores Beatrice’s cleverness and her strategic detachment. Rather than participating in the Greek system's downfall or trying to “fix” things, Beatrice knows that the weight of public opinion is often the most powerful force for punishment and accountability. It also reflects the show’s larger themes of image, power, and reputation, with Beatrice positioning herself as an observer and manipulator, understanding that the public’s judgment can be a far greater weapon than any formal legal consequences. The irony here is that Beatrice is distancing herself from the chaos, yet she is still indirectly controlling the narrative by letting others self-destruct in the court of public opinion. She’s not innocent—she’s just letting the system eat itself. 14:50 - “Two Clean-Cut Men Spreading God’s Word” + “Avon Ladies” + “Olive Branches” LUCIEN Who do we have here? Just two clean-cut men spreading God's word, or is this the Avon ladies calling ? BLAISE Scott, here, wanted to say he's very sorry for fighting you. SCOTT Yeah. BLAISE Okay? He's very torn up about it, so, forgiveness would mean a lot to him. LUCIEN Well, olive branch accepted . But if you'll excuse me, I have some decorating supervising to do. SCOTT I don't like olives. They're too salty. BLAISE Keep it rolling. No more olives. This set is a triple threat of references! Allusion Type:  Biblical, Cultural, and Commercial References Reference Level: Direct References + Metaphor Explanation: Lucien’s first line is a witty jab—a clever way to question their motives: are they here to spread peace and ask for forgiveness (like a missionary), or are they here to sell something (like Avon reps)? Clean-Cut Men Spreading God's Word:  referring to missionaries or evangelists who often spread religious teachings, sometimes with a “clean-cut” image of purity or wholesomeness. It’s a nod to the pious and selfless. Avon Ladies : This is a pop culture reference to Avon representatives, who are door-to-door salespeople, primarily women, selling beauty and health products. The line here plays with the idea of salesmanship, comparing the sincere act of spreading religious messages with something more commercial and superficial. Olive Branch:  The olive branch is a classic symbol of peace from Greek mythology and Christianity, often representing forgiveness and reconciliation. Lucien’s flippant acceptance reveals how the show often plays with superficial gestures of peace, which are common in manipulative settings . Why It Matters: Lucien’s play on words  shows how these characters are constantly questioning motives . He juxtaposes two very different kinds of outreach—one that is genuine and spiritual (spreading God’s word) and another that’s commercial and manipulative (selling products). It speaks to the dual nature of their intentions—they might be offering forgiveness, but it’s a transaction rather than an authentic gesture. The olive branch reference (though accepted by Lucien) is ironic. The gesture of peace is often a sign of true reconciliation, but Lucien’s casual acceptance suggests he’s only going through the motions —he may accept the peace symbolically, but not genuinely. This also reflects the broader themes of manipulation in the show, where actions are rarely pure or sincere. 21:30 - William Blake CECE Now, all I need is proof of number 27. ANNIE (Sighs) I don't have that one. CECE The sun is descending in the west, and here you stand before me, unpierced and unproven. ANNIE Is that... Is that William Blake? CECE Some of it. Doesn't matter. All tasks must be completed. No exceptions, no exemptions. Allusion Type: Literary Allusion to William Blake's book The Marriage of Heaven and Hell Reference Level: Moderate/Indirect Reference Explanation: CeCe’s line is a deliberate allusion to themes found in the book specifically the Proverbs of Hell  section. In this work, Blake explores the idea that spiritual and moral growth  comes through trials and challenges . "The sun descending in the west, the evening star does arise. / To bring the night. / To bring the night." Why It Matters: The line that CeCe paraphrases references the passage of time  and the inevitable judgment   and testing  that must occur for one to prove their worth . “The sun is descending in the west”  alludes to the end of a phase or cycle , which is often tied to judgment or introspection. This could represent a moment of reckoning , where one’s actions are measured, akin to how Blake’s work often explores how individuals must pass through trials to achieve higher understanding or transformation. “Unpierced and unproven”  refers to the idea that Annie has not yet undergone the necessary trials or spiritual rites of passage to be considered worthy or fully formed to join the sorority. Similar to how Blake's proverbs suggest that tests of character and inner strength are essential for spiritual or personal development. CeCe’s allusion fits well with the show’s broader themes of moral judgment, transformation, and the quest for power. Episode 8 - Theta 14:10 - "He's not Flowers for Algernon ." BLAISE What's funny? BLANDSMAN No, it's just, I don't know. You fucked Scott right into this presidency and fucked yourself right out of the house. BLAISE What do you know, Blandsman? BLANDSMAN I know that I was in the meeting when Scott saw all the checks you had him sign. He's dumb. He's not Flowers for Algernon. BLAISE (chuckles) I told you it was Lucien. BLANDSMAN Yeah. Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah. You keep blaming him, but we both know what's gonna happen when the National Board gets that report tonight. Allusion Type : Literary Allusion to Flowers for Algernon , a 1959 short story and 1966 novel by Daniel Keyes . Reference Level : Direct Reference Explanation: In the story, the protagonist Charlie Gordon, a man with an intellectual disability, undergoes an experimental procedure to increase his intelligence. For a time, it works — he becomes a genius. But the change is temporary, and he eventually regresses to his original cognitive state, leading to a tragic and emotionally charged ending. Blandsman is dismissing any hope that Scott is some kind of latent genius or misunderstood intellect. Unlike Charlie Gordon, who briefly experiences heightened intelligence, Blandsman suggests Scott never had any hidden brilliance to begin with. He’s not “on his way up” or temporarily low-functioning — he’s just plain dumb, and always will be. This comment adds an edge of cruelty, mocking Blaise’s earlier manipulation of Scott and highlighting how little credit Scott receives, even among insiders. It also exposes how Blaise’s schemes are crumbling — she’s lost power, and even her scapegoats (Lucien, Scott) are no longer useful or credible buffers. Why It Matters: The reference to Flowers for Algernon isn't just a jab at Scott — it's a reminder of the fragility of intelligence, status, and transformation in a world where manipulation is currency. Unlike Charlie Gordon, Scott isn’t undergoing any internal journey; he’s a pawn in someone else’s game. And Blaise? She’s rapidly losing control of the board. It also subtly aligns with the show’s themes of performance, perception, and self-delusion — everyone is pretending to be smarter, nobler, or more powerful than they really are. But sooner or later, the façade slips, and what’s left behind isn’t always sympathetic. 14:50 - "Suppose I Framed Roger Rabbit, too?" SCOTT Hey, uh... ( clears throat ) ...you didn't take that money, right? Because Blaise told me you did. LUCIEN Okay, and I suppose I framed Roger Rabbit too? SCOTT No, no, I-I don't think so. LUCIEN Why the fuck would I steal the money, Scott? I'm rich. SCOTT Yeah, Blaise is rich too. LUCIEN No, man. He's poor as dirt. SCOTT Oh, come on. The guy wears Dolce & Gabbana underwear. LUCIEN They're not real. They're fake. Just like he is. Fuck. Allusion Type: Pop Culture / Film Allusion to Who Framed Roger Rabbit? (1988) Reference Level: Direct Reference Explanation: Lucien is referencing the live-action/animated noir-comedy in which a cartoon rabbit is accused of murder — and it turns out to be part of a much larger conspiracy. The title itself became shorthand for outlandish scapegoating, as the film hinges on Roger being falsely accused despite how ridiculous it seems. Lucien's comeback plays on that very absurdity. By comparing Scott’s belief to a Roger Rabbit-level conspiracy, Lucien implies that Blaise’s story is equally cartoonish and obviously false. It's also a subtle dig at how gullible Scott is — the idea that Lucien, ever the Machiavellian schemer, would stoop to such cartoonish antics is laughable to him. Why It Matters: This moment captures Cruel Intentions’ talent for weaving high and low culture. Lucien isn’t quoting Shakespeare — he’s tossing in a sardonic nod to an iconic '80s film to underscore the absurdity of the situation and deflect blame. But under the wit, there's weight: Lucien, who’s been actually scheming all season, hides in plain sight by mocking the very idea of deception. It’s the classic “the devil wears Prada” move — hide the truth behind a punchline. 20:00 - God's Rocks SCOTT Hey, did, uh, Dad tell you the good news? BLAISE Um, no. Not yet. RUSSELL He was talking so much he didn't give me a chance to tell him. I paid back everything that he owed. SCOTT Isn't it great? Look, I know you did it because you needed the money, but I decided rocks don't matter . BLAISE Rocks? SCOTT Yeah, God's rocks . Look, my dad understood. He helped me with the report. It went in, just like we messed up on the books. Just like you said. Allusion Type: Biblical Reference Level: Indirect Reference Explanation: In what might be his most wide-eyed, morally earnest moment, Scott refers to “God’s rocks” — a charmingly literal description of the Ten Commandments , the biblical laws inscribed by God on stone tablets and given to Moses on Mount Sinai . By calling them “rocks,” Scott isn’t being sacrilegious — he’s just simplifying. He’s trying to say he’s moving past guilt and legalism. Scott has accepted that the financial misdeeds he was wrapped up in (fudging numbers, signing checks, being manipulated) were wrong, but also forgivable. In his mind, he confessed, got help from his dad, and the report is in. The moral ledger of The Commandments no longer hold power over him. He’s off the hook even if he’s also (unknowingly) trivializing millennia of religious law and reducing divine commandments to inanimate objects that can be tossed aside once you’ve done your paperwork. His simplicity highlights just how little he truly grasps the weight of morality, guilt, and consequence in the world around him — especially among the schemers like Blaise and Lucien. It’s also a twist on a “grace over law” ideology — he believes in understanding, not judgment. Why It Matters: Scott’s “rocks don’t matter” line is the purest expression of how naive goodness functions in this series. In a show obsessed with schemes, manipulation, and performance, Scott stands out by being genuinely earnest. Whether you see him as a fool or a moral center, this line positions him as someone trying to make peace with wrongdoing in a world that thrives on exploiting it. It’s not just about money — it’s about forgiveness. About grace. About deciding that being good might matter more than following the rules carved in stone. 24:50 - " Why are you crying into the wall like an Amish schoolmarm?" CECE No, no. Tanya. Tanya. I don't care if you think it's a fire hazard because I will personally set you on fire myself. CAROLNE Not even your hypothetical arson can ruin this, CeCe. CECE Caroline, I'm sorry. I just want everything to be perfect, but you have no idea the insolence that I'm up against... CAROLINE CeCe, we did it. We have Annie. We won. CeCe begins to cry and walks to a corner. CAROLNE CeCe? Why are you crying into the wall like an Amish schoolmarm? CECE (inhales deeply) My mother told me I'm very unattractive when I cry. Allusion Type: Cultural & Psychological Reference Level: Moderate / Indirect Explanation: Amish communities are often depicted as embracing a lifestyle that values restraint, modesty, and discipline, particularly in emotional expression. “Crying into the wall” evokes the image of a person trying to hide their emotions, as if they are ashamed of their vulnerability. The comparison to an “Amish schoolmarm” further exaggerates the stereotype of stiff emotional control, suggesting that CeCe is embodying this repressed, overly disciplined figure who cannot openly express her sorrow without shame. This allusion is layered with irony: CeCe’s public display of emotion contrasts with the very idea of the Amish cultural norm she is compared to. The term “ schoolmarm ” also carries connotations of teaching authority, which further highlights CeCe’s complex character: someone trying to maintain control and hide personal vulnerability, despite her emotional breakdown. Why It Matters: The Amish schoolmarm comparison underscores CeCe’s inner conflict. She’s in a moment of profound emotional release, yet the stigma she feels about showing weakness makes her want to suppress it — which is why she hides her face against the wall. The absurdity of this cultural stereotype highlights CeCe’s attempts to balance her personal feelings with her outward stoicism in a world that rewards emotional control. Additionally, it speaks to family dynamics (as CeCe mentions her mother’s harsh judgment about her crying) and the social pressures CeCe feels as someone who is expected to be strong and composed. This allusion to Amish culture, while played for comedic effect, deepens the viewer's understanding of CeCe’s struggles with vulnerability — not just with Caroline, but with the expectations placed on her by her upbringing. Did you catch any others? Let me know in the comments. Class Consciousness It shouldn't be a surprise to anybody when I say that formal education, especially collegiate, has become somewhat of a privilege. Imagine amassing thousands upon thousands of dollars in student loans to get a degree that is essentially a key into higher society. Imagine spending thousands of dollars to join and stay in a fraternity or sorority that is also essentially an exclusive club in the exclusive parts of society. And imagine those thousands of dollars being a drop in the bucket. Hardly a thing to think about. That's the case for these characters. They've been raised in a rich echo chamber where they can even be quoted saying, DialogueExpress.com That the characters are able to say these allusions — furthermore, to casually say them, is a way to "say you're highly educated without saying you're highly educated." The characters quote modern pop culture, sure, but they also quote classical/historic/niche/etc. pieces. Things only the highly/well educated folk know. It's like they're speaking in code of "I know more because I'm richer than you." It's class consciousness with a superiority complex. Conclusion In the eigth episode, Blaise (surprisingly) hits the nail on the head when he says, "Everything's about the money, Scott...The only people with the luxury of saying it's not about the money are those who already have it...What do you think it takes, Scott, just to even step foot through the doors of a place like this? Money. It costs money. It costs money to get in, and it costs money to stay in. More and more of it every year. To fit in, to have an audience with the alumni, to have people take you seriously. Everything costs something. So, yeah, maybe it's not about the money for you, Scott. But when you don't have it, everything is about the money." So, for those where it's not about the money, the language they use to manipulate, charm, and lean into corruption might be beautiful and intelligent. But the power is being able to understand what is said between the lines. This aesthetic snobbery used as ammunition. Do you know Latin? With fourteen minutes left in the season, the sisters of Delta Phi Pi start speaking Latin. Thank you, Thestelmer on Reddit for looking further into this. " Adoro te devote " is a prayer written by Thomas Aquinas . From Wikipedia, they say this much: Does this necessarily mean anything for the moment? Does the prayer add anything other than the superior air of speaking Latin? Doesn't matter. They know it and you don't, so ... Always read between the lines, Katherine Arkady P.S. Not for nothing, Sarah Catherine Hook, who plays Caroline, is also in Season 3 of White Lotus.   If I had a nickel for every time the Clintons were brought up in a scene with her, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened twice.

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